GOTCHA

"Tingly skies full of surprise oh how I love when with surmise, the little rascal aims his dart as if it were, poetic art!" When I am hit by this cute cupid's arrow, I find myself writing about love and romance. I will never fight it, I must enjoy this feeling and write on. When cupid's arrow aims for you, there isn't much that you can do!

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Sotto Poet

Date: 7/26/2025 11:49:00 AM

Very well crafted poem, Paula. I enjoy reading your metaphor layers about always-needed Cupid. Good luck with the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2025 11:27:00 AM

Great job!

Paul Bell

Date: 7/26/2025 4:34:00 AM

When that arrow hits the spot, it's like Robin Hood and his maid who was hot.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:08:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "GOTCHA" write. I enjoyed writing this fun write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 6:08:00 PM

Cute poetry, Paula, good luck in the contest! Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:06:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found this to be, a Cute poetry. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, good luck in the contest. It was so much fun to bring this one to life. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Sara Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 5:14:00 PM

Cupid does work in strange ways and hits us unexpectedly. Cute poem...best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:04:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. Glad you found it to be, a Cute poem. "Thank You" Also thanks for your, best wishes with the contest. It was a ton of fun to write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2025 1:42:00 PM

Fire away of cupid. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2025 11:02:00 AM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my "GOTCHA" write. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/25/2025 11:22:00 AM

Paula, a cute poem. We all need cupid's arrow sometimes.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2025 12:16:00 PM

I am delighted you dropped in with your comment and found it to be, a cute poem. "Thank You" So true when you say, We all need cupid's arrow sometimes. Watch out for cupid's arrows as you go writing away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/25/2025 11:19:00 AM

GOTCHA ~ Date Written:7/25/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet