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Gossamer

I cross the boundary of illusion in a poet's dream through a thin-texture web that waves before me words of black, pass in front of me one word after another flickers before my eyes everything is fragile, delicate then falls by the wayside into a darkness a winding road lays before me twisting and turning to disappear into a gossamer veil that hangs from nowhere shades and shadows are hiders of its secret they call me, inviting me to lift this veil of illusion where dreamers dream I balance on a thin thread that stretches across an immense canyon where words rise slowly to be plucked from the air without falling into the unknown where imagination is boiling over forming new words creating the gossamer veil in my dream 2/21/23 contest Writing Challenge- G-words sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 3/1/2023 11:37:00 PM
Frederic, excellent writing, I always love your poems, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, I love the music also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/25/2023 10:53:00 AM
- Excellent writing, Frederic ... a lovely poem :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:27:00 PM
Beautiful writing on the concept of Gossamer. Congratulations!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2023 7:31:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj for your kind remark
Date: 2/24/2023 3:35:00 PM
Super write Frederic! A pleasurable read. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2023 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Linda for your kindness
Date: 2/24/2023 3:03:00 PM
That's so beautiful, Frederick! I especially loved your last stanza. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. I enjoyed this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2023 7:28:00 PM
and you have a blessed day too Paula
Date: 2/21/2023 7:58:00 PM
A beautiful poem, I loved reading while listening to the music at the same time.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2023 7:28:00 PM
I don't know why I like putting music with my poetry
Date: 2/21/2023 3:24:00 PM
Definitely a poet's poem, Frederic. A little imagination is all it takes. This should do very well (IMO). A pleasure to read you again today, my friend.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/24/2023 7:30:00 PM
thank you Daniel, yes imagination I wish I had more of it

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