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Goodbye My Darling

Goodbye My Darling Death seemed not so bad on that final midnight September second. “Not so bad for whom?” he’d say if he could. Possibly not so bad for either of them. Their union dissolved as though neither were really in that room. Not she. Not him. Not the way they’d been. Their slowly speeding departure started with the treatments. A day after the second chemo, he was kneeling by the toilet on one big knee, too sick to pull himself up. His head was bent in defeated disbelief and her only help came as small shoulder for a boost, her soft voice wimp reassurance, the big truth embracing them. Kathryn McLoughlin Collins 2005

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Date: 8/11/2013 10:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage "Featured Poem of the Week" - Have a nice day, Kathryn. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2013 6:55:00 AM
Kathryn, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:41:00 AM
very sad cancer is very undignified (7) congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:56:00 AM
Outstanding! The tragedy in all its pain and disbelief. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 7/18/2012 4:14:00 AM
very very sad but beautifully expressed. congratulations on a well-deserved win.
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Date: 7/17/2012 11:52:00 AM
Kathy just a quick congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/17/2012 6:10:00 AM
Such good poetry from such sad events...a very good write, Kathryn.
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:31:00 PM
Hi Kathryn...serious theme this, but you've brought it out so well. Congrats!
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Date: 7/16/2012 2:25:00 PM
Oooo very wrenching... Super poem... Congratulations on your win (though it shoud have placed higher!) Terry
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Date: 7/16/2012 2:15:00 PM
EXCELLENT writting, deep, layered, provative a 7. Definetly a #1 write remember to enter it again when you can. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/16/2012 10:39:00 AM
Raw emotion...sadly depicted...the fairness of life...Death. Well done!! Congrats on win!!
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the new poet (Only) 2012 contest Kathryn. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2012 2:30:00 AM
Kathryn, congratulations in my contest... thank you for the support... soup mail..pd
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Date: 6/29/2012 6:44:00 AM
'...and sorrow paralleled desire in the immense complexity of love,' the closing line of a Carson McCullers short story which I shall never forget. A complex piece of competing, yet blending, emotions. Well done, Kathy. God bless, Keith
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Date: 4/7/2012 7:38:00 PM
Hello Kathy - Please accept my condolences. - Gail
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Date: 4/1/2012 4:23:00 PM
So very sad, Kathryn, and I'm sorry for your loss.
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:54:00 AM
I think death can be a sweet release when someone is in the torment of illness. A sensitive write with much feeling in this Kathy. Luv, Elizabeth
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