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Goodbye Is the Hardest Word

One Day i'll see US smiling in Our Land.... Does it make a difference if you wake up to find me gone? One less little lady in your heart on this new dawn.. Does it make a difference if i leave without Goodbye? Would you ever know? i just left not to let You see me cry.. Does it make a difference not to feel me anymore? Will you ever think of me whilst You pick pebbles from the shore? Does it make a difference if you never hear my voice? Will it ever matter that You left me without choice...? Does it make a difference when you gaze in open seas? Will you ever think of Us in Your balcony of Sweet Dreams? Does it make a difference to see no Daises in the fields? Will you ever find me in the Piazzas,in the Streets? Does it make a difference if i just run and go away? Will you ever think of the day i looked your way...? Does it make a difference that i'm here and you're not there? Wasn't there a promise?,we never lived to live or share... Does it make a difference if we never met at all? Was i just a Sandy Summer Fling,ending with the leaves of Fall? Will you ever think of how happy We could be? Would you ever yearn again for You and Me? Would it be too late to yell and call my name? Would i ever be here to hold You once again? Does it really matter if all would end in Dust? Wasn't it so true !who said passion never last? Does it make a difference ,to whisper your sweet name? Does it make a difference ,Will it take away your pain? Does it make a difference ,this foolish little verse, It doesnt make a difference,because nobody cares.. Dear darling baby its time, i said" Farewell."........... my heart is thorn in pieces,all left unsaid to tell.. If YOU ever miss me everynow and then, Remember in a Rainbow ,one day We'll meet again... Just think about the Present,Our past had find its end, Go and Hug your future as you leave my little hand.... Somehow Someday in heaven we meet to live our dream I'll reach you in the skies, the land of King and Queen Title Inspired By(Carrie Richards poem"The Break UP" ) Charma

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Date: 10/17/2009 10:18:00 AM
Excellent piece Charmaine >> James
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Date: 10/17/2009 8:57:00 AM
would it make a difference if my right arm just decided to be crushed, and be cut away from me? or that my eyes be blinded where i can not see you again? or that my heart should stop beating, for reason to live. these you take with thee. john h loving iii
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Date: 10/13/2009 6:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this tonight...It reminds me of a person that I once knew and is in a faraway place....Marty
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Date: 10/13/2009 9:29:00 AM
I hear yah.... When I was twenty two I had, I guess you could call a summer fling...She was thirty eight and had a daughter my age... Obviously, this was not going to be a relationship that blossomed. Still, she left an impact on me......Good write here.....:JP]
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Date: 10/13/2009 8:00:00 AM
Indeed, you will meet again one day "in the skies," but I suspect he will miss you more than you can imagine. You offer everyone so much joy -- surely, it will "make a difference" to find this absent in his life. Sad but beautifully penned, dear friend. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 10/13/2009 5:59:00 AM
I can feel with you as this happend to me so many times before. Life is going on what however will happen. Great fee verse, Charma! And thank you for your comments...Gert
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Date: 10/13/2009 5:14:00 AM
To me, if one has to ask, does it make a difference? I have to wonder was it real. Real love is like a flowing stream, over rocks and obstacles it flows... your poem is like that flowing stream but many many an obstacle do you find. Was it worth it? Why waste your love in heaven with a man who caused so much pain for you in life on earth. Is he worthy? Ah but only the heart knows.
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Date: 10/13/2009 4:50:00 AM
Your pen did flow freely here Charmaine,..like a shovel in a ditch,..digging deep into the heart. Heart felt write Charmaine ! james
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