Goodbye Forever

Sometimes far away Is expressed with unique gaze Telling emotions Cowardly kept by the fear Leaving possibility Example For Goodbye Contest September 27, 2016

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Constance La France

Date: 9/30/2016 9:51:00 AM

Nayda this was a great example for your contest.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/30/2016 12:30:00 PM

Thank you Constance

Lu Loo

Date: 9/28/2016 7:42:00 AM

"cowardly kept by fear"....very powerful and like Andrea said I love this theme- and ALL your contests for that matter. your ideas are so simple, yet intriguing and poems can carry such depth with them...loved this tanka lovely lady :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/28/2016 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Laura.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2016 3:13:00 PM

This is a nice example , Nayda. I love your goodbye theme for us.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/27/2016 3:17:00 PM

Thank you Andrea