Goodbye Forever

Sometimes far away 
Is expressed with unique gaze
Telling emotions 
Cowardly kept by the fear
Leaving possibility












Example For Goodbye Contest
September 27, 2016
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La France Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Nayda this was a great example for your contest.
Negron Flores Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Constance
Scars Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 7:42 AM
"cowardly kept by fear"....very powerful and like Andrea said I love this theme- and ALL your contests for that matter. your ideas are so simple, yet intriguing and poems can carry such depth with them...loved this tanka lovely lady :)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Laura.
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:13 PM
This is a nice example , Nayda. I love your goodbye theme for us.
Negron Flores Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Andrea
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