Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

Goodbye

Quote By Poet "Life is filled with hurts.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       
Saying Goodbye at any age is the one that hurts the most."

At a young age,
many children learn about the word goodbye.
Their pet may pass away,
shattering their tiny heart.
They may need to move,
leaving their friends far behind.
As one grows,
 the hurt from saying goodbye will follow them.
That first boyfriend,
breaks their heart into a million little pieces.
Goodbye stays with one for their entire life,
sometimes it is a good thing.
Saying goodbye to a person or thing,
can set us free.
Free to live the life that was made for us,
free to be renewed with no more fuss.


Date Written: 2/22/2023

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Lin Lane May 1, 2023 at 4:04 PM I dislike goodbyes. I've had too many that hurt very badly, but your goodbyes are different. Nice quote. Paula Goldsmith May 3, 2023 at 12:11 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am glad you enjoyed my write/quote. I do not like goodbyes. I have also had way too many. I have found sometimes one must do it to save their own life. People can be very hurtful. I don't understand why but they are. Have a great day writing away..........

Unseeking Seeker March 3, 2023 at 8:50 AM Great positive message Paula, warmest congrats on your win Paula Goldsmith May 3, 2023 at 12:07 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am glad you enjoyed my "Goodbye" write. Have a great day writing away..........

Constance La France March 1, 2023 at 11:59 PM Paula, a wonderful goodbye poem, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, I like your created quote also, blessings, Constance Paula Goldsmith March 2, 2023 at 6:41 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am glad you enjoyed both my "Goodbye" write and quote. Thanks for having this contest and for the win. Have a great day writing away..........

Len Gasun March 1, 2023 at 8:53 AM The bad side and good side of goodbyes are beautifully and well-expressed in your poem my dear friend. Congratulations on your 2nd place win and this very uplifting stellar write! Thanks for sharing along with the awesome quote. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs Paula Goldsmith March 2, 2023 at 6:36 AM Thanks for reading/writing. I am glad you like my "Goodbye" write/quote. Guess it is all part of life. Hugs. Have a great day writing away..........

Dave Cox February 26, 2023 at 1:56 PM Goodbyes are sometimes sad and other times a relief. Goodbyes are a fact of life. Take care Dave. Paula Goldsmith February 27, 2023 at 1:04 PM Thanks for reading/writing. I am glad you like this "Goodbye" write. It is all part of life. Have a great day writing away............................

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2023 at 11:12 AM - Not easy to say goodbye ... beautifully written, Paula - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith February 27, 2023 at 1:02 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am glad you enjoyed my write. So true it is not easy to say goodbye. Many times very painful. Hugs. Have a great day writing away............................

Christuraj Alex February 24, 2023 at 7:37 PM "Saying goodbye to a person or thing, can set us free" - great realization. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 10:26 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am glad you like my "Goodbye" write. It can set one free. I have been set free more than once in my life and each time it was for the better. Have a great day writing away.............

Janice Canerdy February 24, 2023 at 6:53 PM Very moving, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 10:24 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great day writing away..................

Beryl Edmonds February 24, 2023 at 4:17 PM An extremely good write Paula, it hurts to say goodbye when one must, sometimes life is very unjust. Congratulations on your win… Belle Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 10:23 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is all part of life. Very hurtful and so unfair. Life goes on. Have a great day writing away............................

Linda Alice Fowler February 24, 2023 at 3:46 PM Live free - goodbye - good thought Paula. Congratulations on your win! :) Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 10:21 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am glad you enjoyed my "Goodbye" write. Many times very painful. Have a great day writing away............................

Ann Peck February 24, 2023 at 3:38 PM Dear Paula, I love your sweet poem. It's so true--goodbye is always near. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 10:19 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. You are right, goodbye is always near. Have a great day writing away..................

Heidi Sands February 24, 2023 at 2:49 PM Congratulations for your win with this truthful poem :) Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 10:17 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is all part of life. Have a great day writing away............................

Sotto Poet February 24, 2023 at 1:00 PM Back with congratulations on your contest podium win, Paula.Your poem is so deserving of such recognition. Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 10:16 AM Great to see you back. Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day writing away............................

Reason A. Poteet February 23, 2023 at 3:55 PM Nicely written, Paula. You are so right on - fear we will go through that with our grandson; his girlfriend graduates this year and he still has a year to go. We'll leave it in God's hands. He knows best. Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2023 at 6:49 AM Thanks for reading/writing. As you know it is all part of life. God does knows best. If they are the right couple it will work out, if not he will find the right lady. Have a great day writing away............................

Sotto Poet February 23, 2023 at 10:40 AM Very well-expressed lines, Paula. Tears and sorrow always follow last goodbyes. Good luck in the contest. Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2023 at 2:22 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. You are right, tears/sorrow always follow a goodbye. Have a great day writing away............................

Deb M February 23, 2023 at 1:55 AM Written beautifully Paula and so true…Enjoyed! Debx Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2023 at 2:23 PM Thanks for reading/writing. I am glad you enjoyed this "Goodbye" write. Have a great day writing away............................

Joanna Daniel February 23, 2023 at 12:01 AM A nice perspective, Paula:) Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2023 at 2:19 PM Thanks for reading/writing. I am glad you like my write. Have a great day writing away............................

Daniel Turner February 22, 2023 at 4:25 PM Goodbyes mean finality and so often sad. It was a pleasure to read you today, Paula. Good luck! Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2023 at 2:18 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. I am glad you find pleasure in this write. That makes me happy. Have a great day writing away............................

Kim Rodrigues February 22, 2023 at 3:08 PM Your writing is real…the reality we all must face, bringing goodbyes and tears…often times new or renewed relationships. Hugs ~ Kim Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2023 at 2:14 PM Thanks for reading/writing. You are so right. Hugs... Have a great day writing away............................

Ann Foster February 22, 2023 at 2:27 PM Great write... Hope you win. Ann Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2023 at 2:12 PM Thanks for reading/writing. All part of life and the people we meet. Have a great day writing away.....................

Suzanne Delaney February 22, 2023 at 2:12 PM Very true Paula: We all experience those sad goodbyes that only make the re unions all the more joyful. Good Luck in the contest. SuZ Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2023 at 2:11 PM Thanks for reading/writing and for you good luck. Guess this is just part of life. Have a great day writing away............................