good wishes and forgiveness

to each of my enemies ~ trying to cut me down made ten of me

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 1/8/2024 5:32:00 PM

Ten Foot Tall Giant Killer

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2024 2:35:00 AM

Only after a yard and a half of strong ale, for Dutch courage lol!

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/4/2024 9:47:00 AM

Aye, Laddy I surely agree. Are we flirting with a sorcerer's apprentice? I think there are 20 of me! :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/4/2024 11:37:00 AM

Too many syllables in (20) Anaya, ten seemed a nice round number, the enemy of my enemy is my friend, but I’m my own worse enemy lol! Cheers David, I’m on it

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/3/2024 10:34:00 PM

Having enemies is baggage you don't need, keeping them close means you don't have to keep looking over your shoulder. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/4/2024 7:55:00 AM

I'd never turn the work down lol.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/4/2024 5:35:00 AM

Be good for your undertaking business lol!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/4/2024 4:53:00 AM

Better still if they're six feet under lol

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/4/2024 12:05:00 AM

Absolutely Tom, remember my monoku, (yes I will kiss my enemy ~ only after I pull out their teeth) or something similar, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 1/3/2024 12:43:00 PM

I can disregard anyone who chooses to be my enemy, but not one who calls me 'friend' and applauds a known enemy.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/3/2024 12:57:00 PM

Indeed Lin, keep your friends close but your enemies even closer, cheers David

Deb M

Date: 1/3/2024 12:26:00 PM

Hehe…. how clever you are “David John” !! I really like it….Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/3/2024 12:53:00 PM

Thanks Deb what doesn’t kill me makes me stronger, not really just wiser lol! Cheers David