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Busy keeping watch over sheep. Angel appears - they would not sleep. The shepherds walked at a quick pace, To look upon the Christ child’s face. They found him lying on the straw. Baby Jesus is who they saw. God’s Son entered the human race. They’d look upon the Christ child’s face. Still pinching themselves at the sight, remembering the angel-light. Heaven’s hosts came from hiding place. They’d look upon the Christ child’s face. “Do not be afraid! There’s good news!” The angels exclaimed to the Jews. Embodiment of holy grace. They’d look upon the Christ child’s face. “Glory to God in the highest.” Hard to say whose eye was driest as shepherds trekked to his birthplace. Tears fall upon the Christ child’s face. “There’s peace on whom God’s favor rests.” The highest calling manifests. His mother holds Him in embrace. They’d look upon the Christ child’s face. 12/18/2021 Nativity Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 1/21/2022 11:31:00 AM
I think the shepherds is my favorite part of the story and even though I loved the Chosen Xmas movie, I was disappointed they did not include the angels appearing to the shepherds. WELL DONE and big Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2022 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I was mixed on The Chosen special. I wasn’t expecting the musical performances and short story. I enjoyed some of it. I was with my ladies group so that was nice.
Date: 1/20/2022 2:33:00 PM
Kim, your kyrielle is delightful! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2022 3:29:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 1/18/2022 8:33:00 PM
Great description and very beautiful poetic work. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2022 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 1/18/2022 2:36:00 PM
Thank you , Kim, congratulations on your win. Bless you with a new year with lots of blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2022 7:50:00 PM
Bless you in this much needed New Year…abundant blessings your way, Eve! Thank you!
Date: 12/28/2021 4:30:00 AM
This would have been enough "“Glory to God in the highest.” Hard to say whose eye was driest as shepherds trekked to his birthplace. Tears fall upon the Christ child’s face." The rest was sprinkles on this cupcake.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thanks so much! What emotion they must have felt! God bless you, cupcake ;)
Date: 12/23/2021 12:08:00 AM
A beautifully described nativity write creative and faithful my friend. A happy Christmas to you and all your family and may the New year bring all your dreams to fruition. Hugs, blessings Jennifer
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2021 11:31:00 AM
May you be abundantly blessed along with your family too! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 12/19/2021 8:40:00 PM
Beautifully written Kim ! On those God favors, His peace rests
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2021 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 12/19/2021 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful festive poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2021 10:34:00 AM
Thank you, Harry! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/19/2021 8:00:00 AM
There is great spirituality in your poem. To think that the Son of God was born on some straw. Shows the leaders of this world, how humble they should be. Greetings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2021 10:35:00 AM
For sure! Thank you, Victor!
Date: 12/19/2021 5:22:00 AM
Much grace and peace in this verse dwelling in divinity. Very apt for the season, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 12/18/2021 4:31:00 PM
Beautifully retelling of the greatest story ever told, Kim. Can you imagine how Mary and Joseph felt there in the manager when the wise men knelt down to worship their son, Jesus. I get chills thinking about that moment. Merry Christmas to you and yours, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2021 9:30:00 PM
So true and the first time Mary saw her son. Merry Christmas, Bill!

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