Good Morning, Ma'Am

Eggs Benedict warmed beneath a silver dome;
Fresh-squeezed juice in a crystal glass;
Crisp, white linen spread upon the cart;
A ‘good morning, ma’am’ -- this is first class.

Ah, room service.  Would that it could be
My daily fare; with a touch of the phone pad,
A cheerful voice asking, ‘May I take your order?’
To hear this each day would make me so glad.

To lay back on a soft, plush pillow,
To savor a French croissant,
To linger over my espresso --
There is nothing else I want.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Man, how did I ever miss this one. I thought for sure I'd seen the winners list for these and I see congratulations here. Anyway, WAY to GO. I saw you winning contests recently and thought i'd check out more of your work. I can see why you are a winner. LUv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Good Morning" Contest, with this delightful Rhyme which I really enjoyed reading...That was a good morning! : ) Love, Annalise
Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Francine's contest. My kinda room service. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Calhoun Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:38 AM
Hi Deb - Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 10:25 PM
soft feel to this morning piece.. CONGRATS, deb for thebalstung ein.. :) huggs, nette
Roberts Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:40 PM
sounded just perfect to me , congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Deb
Richards Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:52 PM
Mmmmm......it all is just heavenly sounding....no wonder a winner!!! Congratulations !!
Johnson Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Every one needs to be spoiled at times. I could use some of that. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:29 PM
So thats what first class is like...lol. Congrats on your win with this luxuriant write. BG
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:24 PM
This really does sound like the perfect morning, Deb. Congratulations on your big win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Congrats Deb on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this excellent entry my friend... enjoy another great top spot with luv.. so well deserved ...
Mehta Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:49 AM
Nice expressions on the Good morning, deb
Pettit Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Are you describing a morning at a hotel here? It surely appears as if you are. You are describing everything pervasively well. Good one Deb.
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 4:23 PM
This is delight to read; makes me hungry for breakfast, Deb..even though it's early evening. lol Best of luck in Francine's contest! Always, Annalise aka Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Lovely write Deb and a grand entry into the contest for Francine.. wonderful images of morning things that stir the soul to awakening..luv.. good luck..
Richards Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Is there room enough for two?? Sounds heavenly !!! :)
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