Good Evening Promenade

This night the moon cast a light for just a moment, a trust, a lust, a gaze at the lingering lazy crowded stars. The wind decided to play, upon its way found its voice releasing its hold whished a while around the ground disturbing the old mole's layer of mold. A roar tore through the silent moor proposing passion through the naked, shaking trees; never being meek, it took their boughs and danced a while. Their get-together are always fun. The wind promenaded into the park of yellow blew words arousing the blue birds caressing their nesting fellows. Lightning flashing, lighting, casting glamour over shadows, zigzagging playfully around the meadow. Rain of course forced a breath in and a breath out. The ground was a blur throughout. Gentle whispering disappears gulping in the air. The owl gave a howling screech turning its head with a smite scowl with that the wind decided to call it a night. 3/25/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Lovely poem, Eve. Congrats on your win.
George   Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 7:54 AM
I enjoyed this very much, Eve. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Ashley Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Eve, vibrant atmospheric imagery in your alluring poem. Congratulations on your awesome win. Warmest wishes and hugs. ~Susan
Gupta Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:10 PM
So lively pictures ... Lovely ... Congratulations on your nice win, Eve ...
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 3:22 PM
- The winners are named and it was great to see your poem on the winning list - Congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:54 PM
You took me to this promenade with your words Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Thomas Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Oh so vivid Eve! Awesome use of alliterations!
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 6:50 AM
You created a very vivid picture with your imagery eve:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 2:20 AM
Great write, Eve, full of alliteration and very atmospheric. Will do well, I know. Viv x
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