Gone South

deserted nest... perched high above on bare oak limb awaiting next spring

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2010 8:00:00 AM

An excellent example of a haiku well done! thanks for your welcome comments. Andrea

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/14/2010 11:06:00 AM

Kind of a sweet melancholy feel about this haiku. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2010 2:37:00 PM

Nice Haiku Audrey, and hopefully these nests will be revisited >> James

Sheol Moribund

Date: 1/11/2010 9:54:00 AM

Dear Audrey: I really like this poem. It reminds me of one of my poems, called Empty Nests. Keep up the great writing. Peace: Sheol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2010 4:23:00 PM

The bare trees reveal there treasures and remind us of the hope of resurrection. Keep the magical Haikus flowing. Sara

P Sheart

Date: 1/10/2010 2:39:00 PM

A beautiful image dear Audrey. Love it. On my property I can see a few old nests just waiting for spring. Lovely Haiku my friend. Keep writing so we can keep reading!! Thanks for your comments, you'll have to check out my latest one today. Take care sweet. Love Light Patty

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/10/2010 2:18:00 PM

Thank you for your comment on my poem.It means alot to me.I don't know how this change is going to go.I am sure I will take a couple steps back,but I have all my souper friends to help me thru.

Constance La France

Date: 1/9/2010 11:42:00 PM

A nice picture you paint for us with words, dear heart... and thanks so much for your comment on my poem Where there is love....

Lena Pate

Date: 1/9/2010 10:09:00 PM

Nice imagery. I can almost see the twigs and old feathers.

Marty Owens

Date: 1/9/2010 6:33:00 PM

Very nice Audrey...It's so cold here...I wish it were spring!! lol Enjoyed...Marty

Billy Thekidster

Date: 1/9/2010 6:24:00 PM

Great visual. From one obvious nature lover to another. Great Piece Audrey. Best Wishes Always, Bill