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Golden Sun

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golden sun rising through gun-metal cloud mask.... in the clearing blooms

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Date: 2/13/2023 2:34:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, Sara. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/14/2023 9:02:00 AM

I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Date: 2/10/2023 10:59:00 PM

Love that "gun-metal cloud mask", brilliant haiku, Sara:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2023 9:57:00 AM

I am glad that you found it brilliant, Jo. Your smile at the end added a special touch. Thanks ..Sara

Date: 2/10/2023 9:51:00 PM

'gun metal cloud mask'.... great usage !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2023 9:54:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. Your visits always are uplifting. Sara

Date: 2/10/2023 12:24:00 PM

very nicely done Sara...you are making the picture blush.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2023 4:03:00 AM

Thank you, John. I am delighted by your visit. Sara

Date: 2/10/2023 8:54:00 AM

A beautiful mixture of sunrise and blooms. A fine haiku.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/10/2023 9:23:00 AM

I am delighted that you think so. Thanks for the time spent here. Sara

Date: 2/10/2023 4:56:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this great haiku, Sara. You conveyed a fine scene of the sun rising and blooming. Blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/10/2023 6:47:00 AM

The mask of the sun grew wider, and the sun disappeared for the day. Your visits are magnifico.. Sara