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“Carve your name on hearts, not tombstones. A legacy is etched into the minds of others and the stories they share about you.” - Shannon Adler

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A Jinjagoliath poem:
28th January 2024
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Poem of the Day - 31st January 2024 - this poem is a tribute to my Dad (92) who eventually decided to call in quits on the morning of the 27th. He was loved and his life had been full to the brim. A poet himself, back in the day, as I discovered only recently. He wrote a great deal while he was posted to Singapore in the 1950s connecting with the Wesleyan Methodist Church there. On return home, he started and ran a youth club, every Friday night, that lasted for 50 years from 1970. He loved life but his passing was timely, his legacy far reaching.

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How does it feel? It's hard to tell Sad when I pause Taking moments to dwell It's the pearl that is lost It's the half-empty shell It's the un-told story It's the water-less well How does it feel? Deep emotion stirs Where the long goodbye Has now lifted it's curse And the shadowy valley At last is traversed So the heavenly moonlight Guides the soul, now immersed To the traveller's rest Angel bells welcome in As adventure concludes Ending all earthly din Yet, we cheer and we shout For a presence so full Not a moment's regret Nothing mundane or dull The poet and lover Of life and it's pasture Your memory rich While you journey to rapture Though a vacancy sign Is erected below you As we move to conclude Let our words rise to show you.. This love legacy, bright It will sparkle forever For you taught us of hope As you bound us together It's a beautiful tether That will never be broken Your legacy, strong And of you, highly spoken As our eyes may be teary As these words are no measure For the gold in our hearts Is your love's lasting treasure

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/24/2024 1:55:00 PM

Gosh you really have chosen the best poem as your most fave. I really felt this poem and it made me tear up and cry. So sincere and emotive. Your words, they are evocative and so very well articulated in way that evn a stoneheart would feel the heat of emotions flowing throughout! I missed reading this I suppose? Congratulations on potd too. Well deserved! I especially loved the opening and the ending in this. Fave it is for me too

Christopher Grieves
Date: 3/24/2024 3:30:00 PM

Dear Ink, I'm sorry to have made you cry x but you connected with the deep emotion behind the simple words. Bless you in all your own struggles. And thank you for your kind poetic heart. Cx

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/29/2024 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, ??Isaiah 13:12 KJVAAE?? [12] I will make a man more precious than fine gold; even a man than the golden wedge of Ophir. Beautiful poem , love it

Christopher Grieves
Date: 2/29/2024 1:00:00 PM

Thanks Stephan, that Isaiah quote is spot on. Thanks for sharing:)) Blessings

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/3/2024 1:15:00 PM

A fav on your POTD, Christopher! A more than well done poem. An excellent one! It showcases your talent, and time to write,. Poetry was never neant to sound like a jingle in an ad; your addition of image and audio was most thoughtful, indeed. Plus memirs of your father. Thank you. Pangie xx

Christopher Grieves
Date: 2/3/2024 3:05:00 PM

Well you have brightened my day, Pangie. Thank you for your generous comments and your beautiful sentiment. I appreciate it greatly :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/2/2024 5:13:00 AM

BIG congrats on POTD, Christopher. Awesome tribute you wrote to your father.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 2/2/2024 7:05:00 AM

Thanks - I really appreciate you stopping by Vijay :))

Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 8:55:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 8:58:00 PM

Bless you, Paige :))

Bill Baker

Date: 1/31/2024 7:00:00 PM

Back to say, "Congratulations on your POTD honor, Christopher! Well deserved. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:08:00 PM

Thanks for your terrific encouragement Bill x

Maria Williams

Date: 1/31/2024 6:18:00 PM

A wonderful emotive poem dedicated to your Father. Congratulations on your POTD Christopher, so well deserved. Maria

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:11:00 PM

Dear Maria, thank you for calling by. He was a special man, even before fatherhood, as we are discovering from old photos and letters. Bless you. Cx

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/31/2024 6:11:00 PM

Dear Christopher, the picture you have chosen is beautiful in every way. This thought within the quote makes my eyes misty. ' Carve your name on hearts, not tombstones ' I'm so sorry for your loss, my dear friend. Your words are tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:14:00 PM

Brandy, dear poet, thank you for your kindness and lovely appreciation. There is more gratefulness and peace than sadness here. I love that you stopped by. Cx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/31/2024 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on the POTD. A beautiful poem with a tinge of sadness. Love remembered is never forgotten.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 2:17:00 PM

I agree Hilda. People come alive again in the eternity of our memories. Bless you. Cx

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 1/31/2024 12:33:00 PM

Dear Christopher, This poem is breath takingly beautiful. I am in awe of your perfect rhymes and lovely emotive words. Congratulations on being honored for this well crafted POTD.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 1:50:00 PM

How lovely are your words? I am blown away xx Thank you Nancy. Cx

Paige Hind

Date: 1/31/2024 12:22:00 PM

This is absolutely so moving, Christopher. I enjoyed reading this. May he rest in peace...

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 1:49:00 PM

Bless you Paige for your thoughtfulness. I am sure his peace is assured and thank you. Cx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/31/2024 12:05:00 PM

Oh, I love this so. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 1:46:00 PM

He has and continues to.. through comments like yours, thanks Gina. Cx

Deb M

Date: 1/31/2024 11:02:00 AM

Just love this Christopher especially the last verse….Congratulations on POTD for such a touching poem! Debx

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 1:42:00 PM

Thank you Debx Your words warm my heart. Cx

Jay Narain

Date: 1/31/2024 9:54:00 AM

Nce poem. Well deserved POTD win.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Jay :))

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2024 8:33:00 AM

A well-deserved win for a POTD. Well done.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Victor :))

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/31/2024 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away....................

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:42:00 AM

Bless you for calling by Paula :)) Cx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/31/2024 6:46:00 AM

A moving write Christopher. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:46:00 AM

So nice of you to say Linda - when I read this aloud for the first time after writing, it did move me - which rarely happens - but it was a sign of something rooted deeper thank just the words. Bless you for calling by Cx

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/31/2024 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD! So heartwarming and beautiful. Paulette

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:44:00 AM

I am glad you think so Paulette, as I hope (through the slight sadness of the moment) there is a tribute to a much loved and respected human close to all our hearts. Thank you for your comment - many blessings Cx

Tom Woody

Date: 1/31/2024 5:21:00 AM

Sweet poem for a POTD day Chris

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:41:00 AM

Very much appreciated Tom :))

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/31/2024 3:34:00 AM

Chris, a sad but sweet poem, congratulations on POTD.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Tania, I do appreciate you taking time to comment :) Cx

Lin Lane

Date: 1/31/2024 3:17:00 AM

This could only have been written by a lovingly grateful heart. Congratulations on your potd, Chris.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 7:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Lin, you are correct that there is much to be grateful for even in the sadness of passing - I have far more stories to tell that bring light and colour than the few shadowy times. Bless you for stopping by :) Cx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/31/2024 3:00:00 AM

a wonderfully touching poem and certainly one deserving of the POTD designation. Hearty congrats, Chris!

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 3:05:00 AM

Thank you Sara, dear poet x

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 1/31/2024 2:24:00 AM

Dear Christopher, I wanted to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you on your poem, being chosen as the Poem of the Day. What a well-deserved honor for such a touching and beautifully crafted piece of poetry. It is a testament to your talent. It’s evident that each line was carefully crafted, imbued with your unique perspective and insight into the human experience. Your poem has touched the hearts of many, including mine, and I’m grateful to have experienced its beauty. -Blessings, Daniel

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 2:36:00 AM

Wow, Daniel, I am truly overwhelmed. Thank you so very much :))

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/31/2024 1:45:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem, a treasure in tribute to the precious one you have lost Christopher. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 1:55:00 AM

Hi Beryl, lovely of you to say x people are being very kind. Sometimes a poem we write really comes from a deeper than expected place, but to get POTD is just an unexpected extra blessing. Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2024 1:38:00 AM

- A tender and lovely poem, Christopher :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs

Christopher Grieves
Date: 1/31/2024 1:51:00 AM

Anne-Lise, so lovely of you to pass by x I like that you use the word 'tender' it somehow warms my spirit. Bless you and thank you :))