Gold

"Gold" By: Sherya Desai Gold. gold is what I Am. gold is what I Breath. With a wave of My Hand everyone kneels. I Walk on diamonds. I Play with pearls . I Shine brighter than Sirius and the sun. I Am more perfect than the gods above. the the solar system dances to My Tunes as I Spin it on My Fingertips. I Have glided across all waters I Have walked across the vast sky I Have pranced up to the moon. All with the snap of my fingers. I Sneeze jewels. I Cough money. I Taste riches as I Feast on ambrosia zeus and hades don't come close to the power I Hold in My Hand. The Hand that has created all Starting with the land, ending with no end. goddess, deity, divine no words can describe. I Am your everything. There is no greater than I.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2016 10:42:00 AM

Sara,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 11:14:00 AM

it sure is SO NICE.... Skat

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/4/2016 7:03:00 AM

Sara, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead. 7 out of 7 for this poem.....//:) hugs

Moon Flower

Date: 5/4/2016 4:52:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sara. :)

Skat A

Date: 5/3/2016 9:26:00 PM

Saram interesting first poem,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 5/3/2016 5:32:00 PM

Unique take on feminism. I like the vibes, though I believe in a higher power. I LOVED "I cough money!" BLAM! Welcome to Soup. If you look to your left, you can see Poets New under the links. That is how I found you and this poem. If you click on that link, you will be able to meet up with other new poets just arriving on Soup. You can also read all the member poems under "Poems New ALL" and there you can read many poets. Hope you enjoy Soup. Terms and Agreements can be found below.