Gogyohka 1

Winds stir
Nature's acorn crop 
Pines sigh, oaks rustle
Hurricane's outer bands
Over homeplace     

First writing of a gogyohka...
November 12, 2022

weatherother

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Valsa George

November 15, 2022 at 7:08 PM

This is a free poetic form I understand. A poem of five lives and which is concise. You have done full justice to it , Sara.

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2022 at 2:20 PM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the praise. Sara

Bill Baker

November 14, 2022 at 7:02 AM

Nice movement in the poem, and the imagery was excellent, Sara. Now that I've googled gogyohka poetry, I think I'll give it a try. Nice poem for your first in this form, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2022 at 2:19 PM

Go for it, Bill. I know you can do it and do it well. Thanks for the visit. Sara