Gogyohka 1

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Winds stir Nature's acorn crop Pines sigh, oaks rustle Hurricane's outer bands Over homeplace First writing of a gogyohka... November 12, 2022

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Valsa George

Date: 11/15/2022 7:08:00 PM

This is a free poetic form I understand. A poem of five lives and which is concise. You have done full justice to it , Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2022 2:20:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the praise. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2022 7:02:00 AM

Nice movement in the poem, and the imagery was excellent, Sara. Now that I've googled gogyohka poetry, I think I'll give it a try. Nice poem for your first in this form, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2022 2:19:00 PM

Go for it, Bill. I know you can do it and do it well. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2022 3:41:00 PM

Nice one, Sara. I see you wrote a lot about them.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2022 3:40:00 AM

Tried...Thank you, Andrea. I am still working on trying to figure them out. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/12/2022 12:10:00 PM

Wonderfully descriptive in just a few words, Sara. Unique title--I know what it means-- after I looked it up.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2022 12:31:00 PM

I am glad you looked up the title. Thanks for dropping by, Vijay. I appreciate the kind review. Sara