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I've not edited this and possibly won't (going by my track record). It was very exciting to find so much in the picture that inspired unusual phrases. Apologies I've left in plenty of dud lines but think there's the odd good one in there. Something different for a Sunday morning and I almost wrote about flowers haha, not quite though :)

Too much to know, I just don't know it As I fumble around, just a humble poet Frustrated as I watch unfurl a show I just don't know it, too much to know Answers are near, in the palm of my hand It's nobody's fault that I can't understand Incomprehensible nature can instill fear In the palm of my hand, answers are near I look on with intent, with sense of knowing Disconnected in a way from the thoughts flowing On the tip of my tongue, I'm on the scent With sense of knowing, I look on with intent I mirror it all, enough to blow my mind Then blank screen, nothing to find Did I rest on a ledge, view then fall? Enough to blow my mind, I mirror it all Suddenly I'm scared, don't like what I see There's no turning away, I'm staring at me It's like looking could cause one to be ensnared Don't like what I see, suddenly I'm scared There's still sun and sky, backdrop in tact I was running on empty, mixing fiction with fact Unearths strange emotions when eye to eye Backdrop in tact, there's still sun and sky Just consider my make up, yet try not to dwell Or get lost in a world of an unwishing well Like divining all from the leaves in a cup Yet try not to dwell, just consider my make up Things crawl out of sight, enter by stealth Am I all that I am or a composite self There's no comprehensible logic, try as I might Enter by stealth, things crawl out of sight The connection to things, inexplicably true Resonance of rain, innate recognition of you They dwindle quickly these threads and strings Inexplicably true, the connection to things With the glass in-between, gets too warm inside With shortness of breath and need to run and hide Exit the hot house before too much I glean Gets too warm inside, with the glass in-between I try to dress ornate to set self apart I sense beating or mimicking of more than one heart I'm a tangle and mishmash, confusion of fate To set self apart, I try to dress ornate If all things renew, but what memories last? Is there a point in time when permanence cast? Or one chance only and it's that that I blew But what memories last if all things renew? Interconnected, superhighway on heat On the cusp of elation, then suffer defeat It's centrifugal fulcrum, no wonder affected Super highway on heat, interconnected Broken magnetics, attract and repel So we salivate over ideas of heaven and hell Seek deeper meaning, yet distracted by aesthetics Attract and repel, broken magnetics Why am I writing, when I fear I'm a bore Hermit intentions mean crave company more Constantly battle with self, so tired of fighting When I fear I'm a bore, why am I writing? Stick to the lines, notice square or rounded Simple concepts within which truth compounded Let eyes glaze over, seeing too much blinds Notice square or rounded, stick to the lines When everything's veined, tell me what then? When the age old is too old, do we all start again? Forget me not discolours yet memory ingrained Tell me what then, when everything's veined? Gently we tilt to the sun, awash with emotion Soothed body and soul when relinquish self to devotion I cannot explain this story I've spun Awash with emotion, gently we tilt to the sun Thyself needs to cleanse, weighed down by the cycle Choose guide well, good advice comes from Michael There's miracles existing in the power of friends Weighed down by the cycle, thyself needs to cleanse I'm not back to the start, just lost in the middle Unaware of the question but attempting the riddle Getting too close hurts, it really does smart Just lost in the middle, I'm not back to the start

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Date: 7/21/2024 7:30:00 AM
This , is just brilliant! I got hooked from The very first line, how youv interpreted the artwork is beyond clever. I wouldnt have thought of writing like this for that and i must say as i read this and them looked at it it all made sense and somehow goes so well. Where do you find these artworks? I would like to see. Also i must highlight those lines about “what then” hits so deep and strong as well “ Seek deeper meaning, yet distracted by aesthetics Attract and repel, broken magnetics” i feel like thats human nature and many can resonate witb that! What a profound and powerful poem this is! If this is just an unpolished version, you should know it doesnt need any polishing! Its impeccable! Love this. The depth, the introspection and the soulful nature of it blew me away
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Date: 7/21/2024 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Ink, I used to either search by my favourite artists, what I'd seen in galleries or by genre. But I discovered a Facebook page that seems very tuned in to what I like and posts several paintings a day. It's https://www.facebook.com/share/jZEMF53ytL7Byx52/. Thank you for your very supportive words. I didn't really think or plan, I just wrote. I have actually cut another version of this in half and tightened up the language. Might see if there's anywhere to enter it. Thanks for your kind words x
Date: 7/21/2024 3:23:00 AM
A poetic eruption DD...I stood back and just enjoyed the spontaneous fireworks without trying to put the whole poem together in my mind...this one is more like a kaleidoscope. Very much enjoyed reading as it went its way.
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Date: 7/21/2024 3:32:00 AM
It's very much just a flow of consciousness without any pondering taking place (apart from the lifes worth of pondering that preceded it haha). I questioned a few of my lines as perhaps too weird but wrote them anyway as they were from feel rather than rational thought. It was like playing a fun game of word association :) thank you for reading this mammoth one x
Date: 7/21/2024 3:14:00 AM
What a fascinating poem Dilly !unedited perhaps, personally I wouldn’t even try to edit! 20 mind blowing stanzas got to be some kind of record for an Ekphrasis, I believe we do metamorphose what we see by giving it meaning, making human consciousness the middleman of the cosmos, I’ve read it a few times now, and enjoy more on each read, spontaneous and abstractly beautiful, a Fave for sure, cheers David
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Date: 7/21/2024 3:28:00 AM
I hadn't counted but oops - yes 20! I got to 3 or 4 and thought I'd just write another then all of a sudden I was carried along on the crest of it. It's no work of art but it was a fun ride that took me by surprise. It feels more like the ideas for other poems just drawn out from the painting - think I might be swap quatrained out now though haha. They'd make a good pack of conversation starters for the just right merry moment in the pub where conversations get weird and deep :) thank you for the fave and the re-read - highly honoured

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