God's Gift

The sweet smelling morning bright
Awed by the mellow colourful sight
Of this paradise on earth
Nature dressed as a mystical sprite

The dewy air and shimmering dew drops
Fragrance rising from the flowering hops
The chirping birds on the shore
Stunned traveller along the way stops

Mossy ground overgrown with vines
A daisy in her yellow gown shines
Stark mountains look on with pride
And drink this lovely morning’s wines

God’s pure gifts sing out his hymns
His kindness this sheer beauty claims
Sapphire sky dance over the sapphire lake
Vibrant nature no living being could tame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/30/2011 11:18:00 AM
Excelent and impressive write.
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Date: 4/29/2011 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations onthe n first place win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:01:00 AM
Enthralling piece of poetry.Loved the end rhymes. Many Congrats to you Tahera on your 1st place win Love,gautami
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Date: 4/27/2011 4:44:00 AM
Dear Tahera, great poem to be penned!thank you for an awesome reading experience.congratulations too.
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:18:00 PM
This is the good stuff!!!! Much enjoyed the overgrown vines and drinking of the morning's wines. Special words to express how much you love nature. Your poem comes full circle nicely when you mention God's gifts signing out hymns. ONly He could create the imagery u beautifully scribed here. Congrats on truly a gorgeous poem! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:24:00 PM
Very good placement for this deserving poem. His pure gifts do sing His hymns.
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:42:00 PM
What a stunning piece. Congrats..so glad to share the spot with you..BG
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:21:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win, lovely to see you do so well! Light & love
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Date: 4/26/2011 5:32:00 PM
Great to see such a quality poem at the top, Tahera. Congratulations on your lovely entry in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:16:00 PM
Beautifully written, Tahera! Congratulations on your first-place win. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2011 1:25:00 PM
This is such a beauty, Tahera....I am so glad to share this place with you and the other beautiful poems...it is an honor!
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:52:00 PM
Many congrats on being number one, Tahera : )
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:05:00 PM
Congrats Tahera dear on your first place win in John's contest with this perfect poem luv.. enjoy your top spot my friend with luv..
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in the John Moses Freeman's contest "Rubaiyat". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:42:00 AM
Mega congratulations on your first place win Tahera (((( applause )))) well done.....:) smiles
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:11:00 AM
Very nice. Good Job.
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:05:00 AM
Great descriptive piece and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:37:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Tahera. Many congrats on your first place win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/26/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on 1st place win with this beauty, so picturesque and serene. Definitely a view to wake up to. Caryl
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Date: 4/13/2011 8:13:00 AM
I am sure this will do very well. A wonderfully descriptive offering. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:26:00 AM
very * enchanting and magical verse * created amid soft pastels * with a nicely flowing and * pleasant rhyme * although their is one whom does * command All of nature for * His Glory, created it. * love sarah
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