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"god's Ace" (Up the Sleeve)

Great solar winds Agape’s breath Where souls began Cosmos's bequeath First living soul Then quickened spirit Life’s son of gold Mind soon seared it Minds spent time Lost from Agape Became cursed in time And not love’s copy Within love’s genre As solar wind blows Renewing must be Love's kingdom glows The kingdom not swayed By observation Love's DNA Whole convocation Agape’s copy Surety of life Never sloppy Devours the mind's strife Life has surety Carnal will not sway Ace of purity Holy DNA!! 3-5-2010

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/22/2010 1:28:00 PM

I love that last line! I just see Robin turned to the camera as Adam West announces his solution to the latest riddle! You have an ingratiating style. Hang onto your life and your style. Regards, Gerard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2010 12:50:00 PM

thanks for your inspirational writing, john, and for your many recent comments to me. I liked the imagery of Agape's breath and the solar winds in this one. LUv, andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/14/2010 6:02:00 AM

You've got it right on, Moses. The last line iw the key to understanding God's Creation! Smiles. Lovingly, Dane Ann (PS, John, I read a poem/story on here that I think you will absolutely love. Here's the link=>http://poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=211699 Be sure to read both parts. I just had to share this awsome work by a fellow souper with you...a man of spiritual depth. ENJOY!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2010 8:17:00 PM

Perfection Moses.. a wonderful brilliant write and immense message of salvation ... luv the analogy of the ace up God's sleeve.. very unique ...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/10/2010 5:28:00 PM

Hello Moses, enjoyed your poem today, holy DNA would have been a good name too. Thanks for sharing. As Daver would say Big Love! Robert

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 3/10/2010 8:35:00 AM

Excellent piece you have penned here Moses....deep and thought provoking. A testament to your faith! HIS truth always will shine! Always a joy to read your poems! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes! Have a Gloriously Blessed day~Mary

Daver Austin

Date: 3/8/2010 2:49:00 PM

This Holy DNA you speak of...what an interesting thought! Too bad the scientists can't see it through their microscopes. BIG LOVE, daver

John Freeman
Date: 3/31/2013 3:42:00 PM

They do see it Dav, they just dont know what it is when they see it! Smile, thanks for comment. Agape moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2010 7:24:00 AM

John, I thought that I had commented on this one but I do not see it here...If we all could just get closer and closer to the one who made us then we would not be so easily swayed by the carnal...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 3/7/2010 12:24:00 PM

Well at least DNA is an improved perfection over HLA. Life is so precious. I love the way you intertwine your thoughts as you creatively blend faith and reality.

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 3/7/2010 3:38:00 AM

Thank you Moses - but what win did I receive with Letting Go?

June Ellen Smith

Date: 3/6/2010 1:52:00 PM

Holy DNA indeed, nice write. Thank you for your comments today. Thankfully my hair is not thinning too much, although it's always been fine. :-). Please call me June Ellen or just Ellen is fine. Always Ellen

David Byrne

Date: 3/5/2010 10:47:00 PM

Great idea and great flow!

James Fraser

Date: 3/5/2010 6:53:00 PM

Lovely write to your faith John, i am not a religious person. But i do have to say that i thank you ever so much for your ever kind words. It does look like i will be a stranger from the soup from the end of this month, infinitive >> its been lovely >> all the very best >> Chowa .... from the Highlander >> James

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/5/2010 2:19:00 PM

Holy DNA, indeed!! Just super, JohnMoses!! Goes to my favs.! THanks for sharing this with! Peace, Audrey

Diane Christian

Date: 3/5/2010 12:34:00 PM

a wonderful poem, wel written, God bless you from diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2010 9:02:00 AM

Spiritual perspectives from your wonderful heart, Moses! This is very inspirational, my friend. Loved the reference to "Holy DNA." Awesome! Love, Carolyn