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God Took A Vacation

God took a Vacation Talk about a hell of a mess! God took a vacation no one on-call to bless not angel nor saint could fill God's abundant Grace-plate God took a vacation left the world to determine its own Apple-inclined fate....

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/16/2025 8:11:00 PM

Well, perhaps a short vacation God had coming to him, after putting up with all of or nonsense for all these millenia... ~ gw

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/17/2025 5:06:00 PM

You said it! Thank you, Gershon.

Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2025 6:21:00 AM

If God takes a vacation the whole world will go topsy turvy! Looking at the world of today, one is apt to wonder if God is on vacation. I enjoyed the 'mocking tone' here. It seems this is the tool of your trade.

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/16/2025 2:13:00 PM

Hi Valsa; yep, things are sure in a mess. Humanity can be its own worst enemy. Thank you, Valsa. Have a great weekend!

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/15/2025 1:53:00 PM

One bad one its sure true.' Wake up its a false Dream though.' he never really leaves its behind Some clouds He goes.' I have seen him there In shining flames..All His colours the nameless Name.' He tells me things.' He guides in Love Sending angels for those He Loves.' All blessings.'

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/15/2025 7:12:00 PM

I hear you, Joe; blessings.

Sand Blown

Date: 3/14/2025 11:14:00 AM

yup.....thems the facts.......len

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2025 2:04:00 PM

Thank you, Len; have a great day.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/14/2025 10:43:00 AM

Does God know all this? I'm smiling. Love the concept of your poem - could be a contest prompt: God on Vacation. Enjoyed your write ... CayCay

Joe Dimino
Date: 3/14/2025 2:09:00 PM

Hi CayCay; Good idea. If you sponsor contests, make it a prompt and see what happens. I bet there will be far better poems than mine. The more I think about it, there are a lot of different entertaining ways that this theme can further be explored. Good luck my friend!