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God of Atoms

God of atoms break my purpose, my workable clay. Feed me clumps of sorrow, sods of joy one particle at a time. Seed me not too much of your breakable sadness, plow me much with your passions. Allow me, if it please you, to dwell in this intricate husk until the sky make a nest in its marrow. Let the dirt of my fingernails guide me inward into your blooms. And when I am ready for the reaping scatter my worms.

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Date: 11/30/2019 2:05:00 AM
What a great way to speak of our demise, you make it sound simple and it is.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/30/2019 11:18:00 AM
I take a 10,000 mile high view of death, even though it may be around the corner! Thanks Caren.
Date: 11/29/2019 9:20:00 PM
Much to ponder and appreciate.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/29/2019 9:23:00 PM
Cheers Richard!
Date: 11/29/2019 11:13:00 AM
A lovely dependence upon God!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/29/2019 1:27:00 PM
Good of you to mention that aspect. Thanks Sunlite.
Date: 11/29/2019 10:21:00 AM
Juicy poetry, love it.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/29/2019 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Maureen!

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