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God Loves Her Best

My rebel looks and longs to fight and censure sets her mouth to bite; then angry deeds her words incite which block the light, which block the light. When rival thoughts are forced to cross, confronting nonconformist dross love asks that truth drive out the gloss or all is loss, or all is loss. Compliance is no easy route for rumble is what she's about. Is there a way to shake her doubt? within, without? within, without? Ask, what is faith without the test? Assuring her in God we rest, prayer paves the path for ev'ry quest. He loves her best, He loves her best.

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Date: 6/15/2018 10:28:00 AM
Living with teenage girls is only challenged by living with teenage boys...a difficult time in their lives and ours. Thanks for the comment. If I remember right, it is a monotetra.
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:46:00 AM
Wow - Your rhyming scheme is awesome with the regularity of the lines with double rhymes, Reason.
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Date: 6/14/2018 12:04:00 AM
Wonderful work. Congrats on win. Faux
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Date: 6/14/2018 4:32:00 PM
glad to meet you fauxcroft, am sure I've not seen your name here. Glad you liked this monorhyme and thanks for the commendation.
Date: 4/28/2013 1:47:00 PM
You are such an inspiration to me. Poetically written monorhyme. Enjoyed the rebel attitude. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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