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Go To the Light

There's the light beckoning me Come on up just let life be Relax from your cares There's no need for strife Give me your all; your life I will never leave or forsake you I'll give my love That's not understood by man Just come to this light It's way up higher Above all sorrow, Cares that's your life I'll surround you Draw you close Open your heart child Love me the most

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/15/2009 6:33:00 PM
I have read 254 of your poems.They are all good.I stopped on this one because I want to go to the light.I am going to try and find a suicide hotline for pierce county before I go.
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Date: 9/16/2009 1:44:00 PM
Nice poem Sara>>James
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:16:00 PM
nicley done, hope you have a nice day!!
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Date: 9/14/2009 9:45:00 AM
I appreciate the enveloping tone to this work, Sara! Such nestled notions warm my heart. Warm regards, John.
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Date: 9/14/2009 9:41:00 AM
a warm and comforting write sara ... thanks for taking time to read my work....
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:50:00 AM
Sara, this is a beautiful poem. (Poetry form: free verse, I think) So much truth has been said in these words. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane (Soupmail for Sara!)
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