Gnarled

the floor smashes into her wrist
twisting the limb
she didn't see the floor, wet

aged 100
her mobility is stress heavy
like being priced out of a home
her fall of unexpected angles
with balance of nature, near gone
sometimes a mis-fire between mind and body
her living in strange places, 
sometimes a drift of confusion

poking out from my mother's cast
purple fingers
swollen 
Cuban cigar fat
gnarled
in a body that pushes her down
like a heavy window slammed shut

she sees each short walk as a victory
when resistance is a national anthem
when the puzzle of gnarled still allows a place to breath
            still allows a way to seek   higher ground
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodgers Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 5:47 PM
Brian, your poignant words depict a poignant reality. Your portrayal of resilience amidst struggle is deeply moving. The imagery of gnarled fingers captures the weight she bears. Yet, within her trials, you beautifully emphasize her victories and determination to seek higher ground. - Blessing, Daniel
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December 30, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Greetings Daniel, I appreciate your most positive assessment of my poem. My mother is remarkable in her fight to push through adversity. Thank you for your insights. Best wishes. Brian
Wells Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:37 PM
This is a tragic tribute to a mother from a son who wishes to free her from her withering body. Yet, it also speaks to anyone who has been forced to confront the fragility and decline of old age. Very superbly conveyed! :-) Thomas
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December 30, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Many thanks, Thomas, for your favourable response to my posting. My mother carries on despite such chronic pain throughout her body. Her wrist remains mis-aligned and quite sore. I hope that you are well. Your recent postings have been exceptional. With appreciation. Brian
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November 28, 2023 at 4:43 PM
A century is a long line of good, sweet memories. Mothers are always remembered for all time. :) My late congratulations Sir Brian! Cliff
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November 28, 2023 at 9:00 PM
Hello Clifford, My appreciation for your congratulatory message. My mother is something of a wonder woman indeed - feisty but durable in spirit. Be well. Brian
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 11:03 AM
wow, she is one strong woman. I think mine will be the same. Already she is coming up on age 92. Awsome tribute, Brian.
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October 31, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks very much for your stop by and affirmative message. Longevity seems to have blessed our mothers. I wish mine wasn't so hobbled by chronic pain. Be well. Thanks again. Brian
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October 23, 2023 at 8:05 AM
I admire your mother, Brian. 100 yrs is no joke, and she still does not throw in the towel, in spite of a broken limb. Reminds me of my mother, though she was 6 yrs younger than yours when she had her accident. ** Regards // paul
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October 23, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Hello Paul, Thank you for the stop by and message. Yes, my mother's will to carry on is remarkable. We soon celebrate her 101st birthday. Look after yourself. With appreciation, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 8:36 AM
I can truly understand this one except for the broken limb (that has not happened to me so far and I call that a blessing). I enjoyed reading your modern style of poetry this morning. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Thanks very much, Sara, for your drop by + affirmative comment. My mother is quite remarkable in her ability to carry on despite the infimities of aging. Look after yourself. Sincerely, Brian
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October 19, 2023 at 2:12 AM
Well done for your win. I'm not in contests these days following my hospitalization. Lost some muse. Oh well, life is like that. Nut I just want to say sorry about your mother. She will be in my prayers. Blessings.
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October 19, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Hello Victor, thank you for your message + thoughtful concern. My mother's broken wrist has certainly set her back. We assist her daily. I hope that you are on the mend. All the best, Brian
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October 14, 2023 at 2:13 AM
Very well-written, Brian. I hope your mother is feeling better, my friend. 100- wow! God bless her...Congrats on your win in Constance's contest! A toast and a few puffs on a Cuban to you and mom! Charlie
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October 14, 2023 at 8:30 AM
Thank you, Charles, for your drop by + congratulatory message. My mother has a tremendous will to live though the quality of her life is poor. Take care of yourself. With appreciation for your encouraging words, Brian
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October 13, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Brian, congratulations on your win. Your imagery is always so innovative and wonderfully descriptive - "purple fingers...Cuban cigar fat." And yet, through all of your mother's pain her indominable spirit rises - "resistance is a national anthem." How perfectly spoken. Thank you for this poignant and powerful poem. Blessings to both of you. Cheers!
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October 13, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Greetings Sam, I hope all is well with you. I appreciate your thoughtful comments on my posting. My mother's broken wrist was reset today - quite painful for her. She has 4 more weeks in the new cast. But she pushes on. Sincerest regards always, Brian
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October 9, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Brian, I do not know how to email you directly, so I am commenting on your poem. Thank you, sincerely, for your kind words and encouragement. I am blown away and feel honored...to be recognized by such a prolific and gifted poet such as yourself. Thank you again, Michael Thomas Huch
Sambourne Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:52 AM
Hello Michael, Thank you for your appraisal of my postings though many are not to the liking of contest sponsors. You are an original, new voice on this site + we welcome + celebrate your poetic excellence. Take care + let your pen flow. Be well. Brian
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October 8, 2023 at 11:24 PM
Brian, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your layout, Constance
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October 9, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Greetings Constance, Thank you for the recognition of my poem. I am in the nursing home frequently assisting my mother who struggles with the cast on her arm. She fights on. With appreciation for your acknowledgement. Be well. Brian
Baker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 8:36 PM
Kudos to your mom for living 100 years and still want to move around some. Nice poem, Brian. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Sambourne Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 5:29 AM
Hello Bill. Yes my mother carries on + nears now, her 101st birthday even though she is much encumbered by ailments. Thank you for your note. All the best, Brian
Jones Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on a win!
Sambourne Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Thanks very much for your stop by + congratulatory message. All the best, Brian
Narain Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Danger lurks at old age, the fall is the worst calamity, I am glad she still can move a little at 100 years of age. Nice poem and glorious win.
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October 3, 2023 at 2:05 PM
Hi Jay, Yes, my mother is a trooper, a "bomb girl" during WW2 making armaments for soldiers. Now she struggles through pain to keep moving. Sad. This latest fall + fracture a terrible set back. Thank you for the drop by + note. Be well. Brian
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:12 PM
Yikes! Dangerous…
Sambourne Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:13 PM
Hi Kim, Yes, my dear mother is in a world of dangerous living. Wishing you wellness, Brian
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