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Glutton

The man waited for Thanksgiving Day,
To take part in an evening buffet
The food would be inviting
He felt his mouth watering
He stayed so impatient for Thursday

He found the food tasting so yummy
He crammed all he could in his tummy
He wanted to go for poo
But sad, nowhere was a loo
He ran up and down very crummy

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Andrew John Date: 11/27/2023 2:52:00 AM Oh, yuk! in one way; oh, delightful in another. An amusing read, Valsa. I enjoyed it. And we don't do Thanksgiving here in the UK, although we usually know when it happens over there. Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/24/2023 11:48:00 AM LOL Valsa. Your set is sooo clever. Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 11/23/2023 11:48:00 AM Valsa, a fun limerick set, congratulations on your winning placement! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 11/19/2023 7:01:00 PM There's 'run' and there's 'run,' I've been told. One involves the legs; the other is brown and uncontrolled. Smiles, gw Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 11/18/2023 7:25:00 AM Oh my intense and fun limerick. You really are brilliant with limericks too dear valsa, you’ve told the story so effortless making your rhymes flow so seamlessly. I love the rhymes yummy and tummy, fits the whole theme of this limerick. Goodluck in the contest. Pleasure always reading you Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 11/18/2023 6:14:00 AM Fun reads today with these fine Limericks, my friend. Have a Happy Thanksgiving! And a wonderful weekend Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 11/17/2023 11:22:00 PM Lol. Fun limerick and seasonal. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply