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Nov.18.2023

Fanny Thanksgiving Limericks

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

The man waited for Thanksgiving Day, To take part in an evening buffet The food would be inviting He felt his mouth watering He stayed so impatient for Thursday He found the food tasting so yummy He crammed all he could in his tummy He wanted to go for poo But sad, nowhere was a loo He ran up and down very crummy

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Andrew John

Date: 11/27/2023 2:52:00 AM

Oh, yuk! in one way; oh, delightful in another. An amusing read, Valsa. I enjoyed it. And we don't do Thanksgiving here in the UK, although we usually know when it happens over there.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/24/2023 11:48:00 AM

LOL Valsa. Your set is sooo clever. Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/23/2023 11:48:00 AM

Valsa, a fun limerick set, congratulations on your winning placement!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/19/2023 7:01:00 PM

There's 'run' and there's 'run,' I've been told. One involves the legs; the other is brown and uncontrolled. Smiles, gw

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/18/2023 3:13:00 PM

your Limerick certainly made me chuckle. Oh how impatient we are for all the food, family, and fixins....then we tend to overindulge....not good for most of us...on another note, congrats on one of your poems appearing in the anthology. I believe Bill told me it's the very first one. Awesome. Have a splendid evening! Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 11/18/2023 7:25:00 AM

Oh my intense and fun limerick. You really are brilliant with limericks too dear valsa, you’ve told the story so effortless making your rhymes flow so seamlessly. I love the rhymes yummy and tummy, fits the whole theme of this limerick. Goodluck in the contest. Pleasure always reading you

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/18/2023 6:14:00 AM

Fun reads today with these fine Limericks, my friend. Have a Happy Thanksgiving! And a wonderful weekend

Karen Jones

Date: 11/17/2023 11:22:00 PM

Lol. Fun limerick and seasonal. Good luck in the contest.