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Glimpses of My Village

“How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood” Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842 How dearly past evokes my red-tiled home Which sits on the hill near a mango tree Where cows merrily graze and cattle roam! Back in my childhood now memories plea For wildlife, rice fields, and days full of fun For haystacks on bull-carts rolling carefree; For mauve-tinged horizons ruby skies spun For grasslands, rivers and monsoon rain fall For prairies serene, thrilled in gleaming sun; When rosy dawns awoke to roosters’ call And farmers tilled their land in sunrise gold As cultural myths invoked in crows’ squall. Oh, land of my dreams how snugly I hold! While treasures dear to me fondly unfold. November 24, 2020 Placed 1st: Writing challenge -Terza Rima - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Ten syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com) Placed 2nd: Podium placing contest 4 by Brian Strand

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Date: 12/10/2021 3:18:00 AM
I have written a poem expressing similar sentiments. I feel life has been more or less similar in every Indian village. How I cuddle those sweet memories to my heart. Thanks for letting me make a journey to my village... !Lovely poem I so enjoyed, Victor !
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Date: 1/11/2021 9:05:00 AM
Have you had the experience mentioned in your poem...I can see myself there, although never being there before...Interesting piece.
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Date: 1/5/2021 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Good memories are the best. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings..................
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:52:00 AM
You took me on a journey to your past memories Vijay, a beautiful write. I missed this gem first time round. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 1/5/2021 1:49:00 AM
It's wonderful Vijay G... Scene you expressed is realistic and amazing... Thanks for such a lovely poem....
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Date: 12/15/2020 3:36:00 AM
What a wonderful glimpse into your childhood Vijay, we never forget these years, our parents as the were then, and our young friends with whom mostly we have now lost contact. Really beautiful, Congratulations on your truly deserved win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/6/2020 9:34:00 PM
Amazing yet again, Vijay:) congratulations:)
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Date: 12/4/2020 1:02:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work you have penned. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/4/2020 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Date: 11/30/2020 11:37:00 AM
A beautiful write Vijay. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/2/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 11/29/2020 7:00:00 AM
Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/30/2020 5:57:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 11/29/2020 5:46:00 AM
Just like Subimal, you collected poems from the natural world! Congratulations on 1st place!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 11/29/2020 2:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay! Beautifully penned poem
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2020 6:05:00 AM
Thank you US.
Date: 11/29/2020 1:25:00 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this excellent and extra special poem _Constance
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2020 6:04:00 AM
Much appreciate, Constance--many many thanks. And thank you, as well, for holding contests.
Date: 11/28/2020 10:44:00 PM
stupendous writings thru the form of Terza Rima; it makes me nostalgic
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab.
Date: 11/28/2020 11:55:00 AM
Vijay beautiful! such memories and a childhood home! Congrats on your top win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Krish.
Date: 11/28/2020 10:52:00 AM
"How dearly childhood memories fondly unfold" Yes they do, here within these images you so vividly paint. Nature is beautiful and you have taken me to your side of the World, through your words. I am smiling. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2020 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Brandy--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 11/28/2020 4:42:00 AM
This is too good Vijayji... you took me to a ride to my own native place... I can so much relate to this. These nostalgic memories are our real treasures. Mind reaches to those places where we could not reach now. Have a great blessed day ~ Ani
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/28/2020 5:27:00 AM
Much appreciate, Ani--many thanks.
Date: 11/26/2020 7:49:00 AM
This reminds me of my village too... awesome write, Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2020 3:28:00 PM
Much appreciate Akkina--many thanks.
Date: 11/25/2020 12:55:00 PM
Dear Vijay you have painted the most beautiful memories with your poetic quill my friend. Such vivid colours and rural scenes I can see through your imagery. It is truly wonderful Vijay ~ thank you for sharing your sweet childhood my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2020 4:45:00 PM
So very kind of you my friend. Your visit is always so special. Much appreciate Ann--many thanks.
Date: 11/25/2020 5:26:00 AM
You took me back to my childhood Vijay. I share similar memories with you in this respect. My childhood was spent in the south of India. There were these train rides every year to our holiday home in Bangalore. I was mesmerized , glued to the window, taking in all the lovely scenery . Childhood memories are the best. Your poem is a Winner , however the best of luck to you. ...Maria Hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2020 6:20:00 AM
My village is quite remote --far from big cities--but it is quite pristine. Thank you Maria for sharing your memories--I know that part of India is so so beautiful! Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Maria.
Date: 11/24/2020 7:44:00 PM
Your poem is very vivid. I can see the scenes well, Vijay. Mike Bayles
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2020 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate.
Date: 11/24/2020 6:51:00 PM
Your place of residence sounds like a place I'd like to retire to. Great poetry, Vijay. Hope all is well my dear friend...Blessings to you and your family...Charlie
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2020 6:17:00 AM
It is pristine but quite remote. Much appreciate Charlie. Many thanks my friend. Happy holidays to you and your family--though we have to do this remotely.
Date: 11/24/2020 1:20:00 PM
picturesque comes to mind... i felt as though i was there, though you often take the reader on a beautiful journey... great write my friend, best wishes in the contest, although i think it's already a winner... hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/24/2020 2:37:00 PM
So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate your comments, Sandy. Many many thanks.
Date: 11/24/2020 12:10:00 PM
You have always had a way of creating vivid imagery through your words .. but with a form like this it's not always easy, but you did it perfectly and a great response to the quote..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/24/2020 1:00:00 PM
So nice to hear--especially from you. Much appreciate, SO. Many thanks.
Date: 11/24/2020 10:21:00 AM
A wonderful write of past memories... I enjoyed it, Vijay. Hope you have a great week :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/24/2020 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
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