Get Your Premium Membership

Glimpse of a Toddy Tapper

That skin-and-bone-like, Chocolate-colored veteran, Fragile personality accession; Ascends tallest of palms, Committed to toddy-tap, As it’s his hereditary profession...! Driving upward and down, Like a smart willing monkey, He reaches the highest of height; Sitting over the petite petioles, As though it's a comfort car-seat, Sets all spiders - meshes aright...! Clears the now-soiled toddy-pots, Crops the prolific flower-stumps, Rectifies, like a surgeon, all clots; Goes around the fronds gliding, As though skiing on sky, Support of nothing but angle-knots...! Of all measures that attracts me, Is his hurdling noble gallantly, From one tree to another, By way of stem-bridges; There-from, like a rat, Or as a missionary-squirrel, On hard earth he reaches, As though in water, he ditches...! 17 January 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/18/2022 1:06:00 AM
Very well written, Christaruj, I too, had to look up what toddy tapping was. Thanks for sharing! Blessings Charlie
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/18/2022 2:07:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/17/2022 10:07:00 PM
Exquisite descriptive phrases, Chrituraj. Great rhythm and easy to read. Have a great week! Bill
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/18/2022 2:07:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/17/2022 9:00:00 PM
I love learning something new and I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you Christuraj. Blessings xxoo
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/17/2022 9:58:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/17/2022 7:23:00 PM
This is so informative. I looked up toddy tapping because of your poem and watched a youtube video. Very cool, Christuraj! I had never heard of it before! Glad I took the time to take it all in!
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/17/2022 8:49:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/17/2022 5:19:00 PM
OOh, nicely crafted penning.
Login to Reply
Alex Avatar
Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/17/2022 8:48:00 PM
Thank you very much.

Book: Shattered Sighs