Glimpse of a Toddy Tapper

That skin-and-bone-like,
Chocolate-colored veteran, 
Fragile personality accession;
Ascends tallest of palms, 
Committed to toddy-tap, 
As it’s his hereditary profession...!

Driving upward and down, 
Like a smart willing monkey, 
He reaches the highest of height;
Sitting over the petite petioles, 
As though it's a comfort car-seat, 
Sets all spiders - meshes aright...!

Clears the now-soiled toddy-pots, 
Crops the prolific flower-stumps, 
Rectifies, like a surgeon, all clots;
Goes around the fronds gliding, 
As though skiing on sky, 
Support of nothing but angle-knots...!

Of all measures that attracts me, 
Is his hurdling noble gallantly,
From one tree to another, 
By way of stem-bridges;
There-from, like a rat, 
Or as a missionary-squirrel, 
On hard earth he reaches,
As though in water, he ditches...!

17 January 2022
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Messina Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 1:06 AM
Very well written, Christaruj, I too, had to look up what toddy tapping was. Thanks for sharing! Blessings Charlie
Alex Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:07 AM
Thank you very much.
Baker Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 10:07 PM
Exquisite descriptive phrases, Chrituraj. Great rhythm and easy to read. Have a great week! Bill
Alex Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 2:07 AM
Thank you very much.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:00 PM
I love learning something new and I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you Christuraj. Blessings xxoo
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:58 PM
Thank you very much.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 7:23 PM
This is so informative. I looked up toddy tapping because of your poem and watched a youtube video. Very cool, Christuraj! I had never heard of it before! Glad I took the time to take it all in!
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 8:49 PM
Thank you very much.
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 5:19 PM
OOh, nicely crafted penning.
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 8:48 PM
Thank you very much.
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