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Glasswinged Sorceress Premiere Contest Winner

When nylon nights trade crystal colours in the stalls of nimble butterfly wings, I blossom as an irenic origami fervently fabricated with snowflakes of greedy gloom, stealing royal violets from the smokey estuaries flowing beneath the heavens befogged with indigos, glistening in periwinkle-arcs of abstract auroras. I reminisce those amaranth stars that whisper graphical pantoums in pearlescent pixels of plum pentagon- shaped skies, as everytime when porcelain acrylics get spilt upon mauve pages ribboned with hydrangeas, my orchid lips spin a twist of leathered spells amidst frozen fahrenheit of frostbit textures. Painting heliotropic oxygen with brushstrokes of peony petals, I carry unspoken words of iris, so that artificial aroma within sculptured truths remains caged behind these dark magenta carnations printed upon cashmere curtains of hallucinating hyacinths. Do photogenic pansies never get frozen in iced pyre of parched patchworks? For, I believe that, drowsy poppies too have streaks of wine stories to narrate in their ages of ache. Perhaps, I'm a glasswinged sorceress of arctic hailstorms, tracing phlox- fluorescent forests with tropical crayons, as oiled hues of multi-dusks flutter across lavender orbs, sprinkling mauve dewdrops upon watercolor dusts of pencil-shaded luna who unlocks silver secrets with skeleton key, washing my bones with lilac fog. So, when these thistle shaded leaves crack their crystal cocoons and the sun sheds its fluffed feathers of hibernation, meet me along the horizons where bright Veronica takes the shape of the moon and reincarnates as a crocheted sangria memory along the translucent sleet of snowy sights. My skin is softer than raisin pearls of mulberry seas, as my spirit is stained with glamorous grape dyes and amethyst-fresco distemper across bitter skies has discoloured every apathetic shade that doesn't seem to define my airbrushed heather heart.

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Date: 10/17/2023 8:22:00 PM
Hiya congratulations on your trophy win! How did I miss this? Beautiful imagery, so deep its breathtaking, fabulous and stunning! Just brilliant. Well-deserved. xoxox I Am Anaya
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Date: 10/17/2023 7:11:00 AM
Awesome comments below Hiya, I concur!
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on your well-deserved Trophy Hiya. Your poetry is a work of art, full of magnificent imagery that effortlessly captures profound feelings. It is extremely amazing how such a youthful soul as yours holds such a wealth of wisdom and knowledge, spilling your heart out into the pages with every stroke of your wonderful quill dipped into poetry. This mellifluous depth reflects the echoes of your lovely and contemplative thoughts, harmonizing with the very essence of your being.
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Date: 10/11/2023 12:00:00 AM
Many congratulations dear, sweet Hiya with your so well deserved win. The poem is full of beauty - such vivid, colourful imagery that conveys great, deep, profound thoughts. For someone so young, you have such heart, knowledge, wisdom. A unique gift that is constantly and magnificently displayed every time you dip your amazing quill into a never ending, deep ink pot - so deep that it echoes your beautiful, thoughtful emotions that resonates with your soul.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 10/11/2023 12:03:00 AM
Always be you dear, sweet one - you are just at the start of your amazing poetic journey that so many will enjoy sharing with you. Congratulations again. Hugs to you xx
Date: 10/10/2023 10:51:00 AM
"my orchid lips spin a twist of leathered spells amidst frozen fahrenheit of frostbit textures." -- "Wow! "For, I believe that, drowsy poppies too have streaks of wine stories to narrate in their ages of ache." Wondrous, spectacular! "dewdrops upon watercolor dusts of pencil-shaded luna" Unbelievably beautiful! A fine poem throughout. Well deserving of honor. Blessings.
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Date: 10/10/2023 6:54:00 AM
Congrats on your trophy win. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/8/2023 9:36:00 PM
Big Congrats to win Trophy. I have no patience to write so long a poem. Admiration again.
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Date: 10/8/2023 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your trophy win. Such a colorful poem filled with creative images.
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Date: 10/8/2023 5:49:00 AM
Well, look who's winning premier contests! Hi Hiya, I love the line "My skin is softer than raisin pearls on mulberry seas..." enticing and creative at the same time. Enjoy your Sunday
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Date: 10/7/2023 11:51:00 PM
Another level! Warmest congratulations on your well deserved trophy win, Hiya
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Date: 10/7/2023 10:24:00 PM
A deserving Trophy for your talent Hiya, every line of your writings is a poetry
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Date: 10/7/2023 10:24:00 PM
Reading your poem , I have wondered why I couldn't spot a triphy image so far. Now I see it here and let me express my hearty congratulations on this well deserved win Hiya. Your poems take me to a wonderful garden where all kinds of flowers bloom and I am reminded of an artist with a palette spraying multishades all over and creating cubic and expressionist paintings like Edvard Munch. Your garden is not one where butterflies visit, but glasswinged sorceress frequent! Amazing !
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Date: 10/7/2023 8:56:00 PM
Congrats on a first place win.
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Date: 10/7/2023 11:35:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work. Sara
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Date: 10/7/2023 10:12:00 AM
Omg yeay! Im so happy you got 1st place my beautiful and talented angelic star!!! Congratulations!!!!
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Date: 10/7/2023 9:25:00 AM
- An impressive piece of writing, Hiya ... congratulations on your trophy win :) - hugs
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Date: 10/6/2023 4:26:00 PM
Your quiver of unique words of imagery and descriptive phrases must be unlimited, or it refills every day. Your poetry continues to amaze me, Hiya. With all the beauty, you still weave mindful messages to your readers. Nuggets of truth and morsels of hope. I especially liked the line, "drowsy poppies too have streaks of wine stories to narrate in their ages of ache". A FAV for my list, my friend. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 10/6/2023 12:58:00 PM
what a descriptive poem filled with metaphors and artistically crafted lines. You have a poetic voice that effectively uses unique vocabulary to create the pictures and the message of your poems. Perhaps you are a glass-winged sorceress for you weave magic with your words. 'Washing my bones with lilac fog' was one of my favorite lines. Outstanding, Hiya. Am faving this one so I can look at it later. Enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 10/6/2023 12:22:00 PM
Once again a very descriptive work you have penned. Emotive and expressive as well. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/6/2023 11:21:00 AM
You have a wonderful way weaving your words.. Your vocabulary is brilliant with so many different descriptions and metaphors... I can feel the angst in your questions and the yearning for understanding.. The start is brilliant and the third stanza brilliant.. Every stanza has vivid imagery... Great poem Hiya
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Date: 10/6/2023 8:31:00 AM
For, I believe that, drowsy poppies too have streaks of wine stories to narrate in their ages of ache-- --meet me along the horizons where bright Veronica takes the shape of the moon and reincarnates ---You dwell in this fabulous world of artistic diction that never ceases to impress. Much enjoyed the ride on the wings of your vocabulary, Hiya.
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Date: 10/6/2023 7:43:00 AM
I have many poems in reserve and some deal with sorceresses. Doubt if mine will ever reach the mastery of your poetry. Your imagery, vocabulary and metaphoric uses are great. A poem to admire especially your alliteration and depth. Blessings.
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Date: 10/6/2023 6:19:00 AM
Dear angelic star, every line in this conveys so much and is so very deeply moving! Its like i just had a metaphorical cocktail with similes and so much imagery and depth! Absolutely love the way you deliver thoughts, sometimes i wonder too how come those photogenic ones aka the ones that are fake but deep within are cruel never face karma and as u said frozen! And the best way to ignore toxicity is by being immersed in an artistic world coloring darkness like a glass winged sorceress! How deep
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/9/2023 2:21:00 AM
My lovely Ink, you're so sweet always!! Thank you so msuch for reading through my words and emotions & actually feeling them.. Your beautiful comments always inspire my heart and are truly rewarding.. And as always, I learn so much from you as you're my inspiration! My fellow glasswinged sorceress and fairy goddess! Sending you lots of love, I'm forever grateful~ :)
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/6/2023 6:22:00 AM
I love ur use of colors and alliterations especially ur use of purple through out in an artistic manner describing and expressing so much as well as questioning all that which flows in this cruel life! Two faced world we live in! Profound and soul hitting this is! Nailed it! And also must highlight ur winter theme here is beyond impeccable! How uve played around with words. Keep shining! Be your own sorceress! Glass winged! Uhuh!airbrushed lies doesnt define you! Yes u are learning that very young! Love this

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