Premiere Contest WinnerGlasswinged Sorceress

When nylon nights
trade crystal colours 
in the stalls of nimble 
butterfly wings, 
I blossom as an 
irenic origami 
fervently fabricated 
with snowflakes of 
greedy gloom, 
stealing royal violets 
from the smokey estuaries 
flowing beneath the 
heavens befogged 
with indigos, glistening 
in periwinkle-arcs of 
abstract auroras. 

I reminisce those 
amaranth stars 
that whisper 
graphical pantoums in 
pearlescent pixels 
of plum pentagon-
shaped skies, 
as everytime when 
porcelain acrylics 
get spilt upon mauve 
pages ribboned 
with hydrangeas, 
my orchid lips spin 
a twist of leathered 
spells amidst 
frozen fahrenheit of 
frostbit textures. 

Painting heliotropic 
oxygen with brushstrokes 
of peony petals, 
I carry unspoken 
words of iris, 
so that artificial aroma 
within sculptured truths 
remains caged
behind these dark 
magenta carnations 
printed upon 
cashmere curtains 
of hallucinating hyacinths. 

Do photogenic pansies 
never get frozen in iced pyre 
of parched patchworks? 
For, I believe that, 
drowsy poppies
too have streaks of
wine stories
to narrate in their 
ages of ache. 

Perhaps, I'm a 
glasswinged sorceress 
of arctic hailstorms, 
tracing phlox-
fluorescent forests 
with tropical crayons, 
as oiled hues of 
multi-dusks flutter 
across lavender orbs, 
sprinkling mauve 
dewdrops upon 
watercolor dusts of 
pencil-shaded luna 
who unlocks 
silver secrets 
with skeleton key, 
washing my bones
with lilac fog. 

So, when these
thistle shaded leaves 
crack their crystal 
cocoons and 
the sun sheds its 
fluffed feathers 
of hibernation, 
meet me along the
horizons where 
bright Veronica 
takes the shape of
the moon and 
reincarnates as a 
crocheted sangria
memory along the
translucent sleet of
snowy sights. 

My skin is softer 
than raisin pearls 
of mulberry seas, 
as my spirit is stained 
with glamorous grape 
dyes and amethyst-fresco
distemper across bitter 
skies has discoloured 
every apathetic shade 
that doesn't seem to 
define my airbrushed 
heather heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Hiya congratulations on your trophy win! How did I miss this? Beautiful imagery, so deep its breathtaking, fabulous and stunning! Just brilliant. Well-deserved. xoxox I Am Anaya
Goff Avatar
October 17, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Awesome comments below Hiya, I concur!
Poet Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Congrats on your well-deserved Trophy Hiya. Your poetry is a work of art, full of magnificent imagery that effortlessly captures profound feelings. It is extremely amazing how such a youthful soul as yours holds such a wealth of wisdom and knowledge, spilling your heart out into the pages with every stroke of your wonderful quill dipped into poetry. This mellifluous depth reflects the echoes of your lovely and contemplative thoughts, harmonizing with the very essence of your being.
Bowring Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM
Many congratulations dear, sweet Hiya with your so well deserved win. The poem is full of beauty - such vivid, colourful imagery that conveys great, deep, profound thoughts. For someone so young, you have such heart, knowledge, wisdom. A unique gift that is constantly and magnificently displayed every time you dip your amazing quill into a never ending, deep ink pot - so deep that it echoes your beautiful, thoughtful emotions that resonates with your soul.
Bowring Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 12:03 AM
Always be you dear, sweet one - you are just at the start of your amazing poetic journey that so many will enjoy sharing with you. Congratulations again. Hugs to you xx
DiMino Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 10:51 AM
"my orchid lips spin a twist of leathered spells amidst frozen fahrenheit of frostbit textures." -- "Wow! "For, I believe that, drowsy poppies too have streaks of wine stories to narrate in their ages of ache." Wondrous, spectacular! "dewdrops upon watercolor dusts of pencil-shaded luna" Unbelievably beautiful! A fine poem throughout. Well deserving of honor. Blessings.
Kendrick Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Congrats on your trophy win. Way to go. Sara
Dutta Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 9:36 PM
Big Congrats to win Trophy. I have no patience to write so long a poem. Admiration again.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Congrats on your trophy win. Such a colorful poem filled with creative images.
Seeker Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 11:51 PM
Another level! Warmest congratulations on your well deserved trophy win, Hiya
George Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 10:24 PM
Reading your poem , I have wondered why I couldn't spot a triphy image so far. Now I see it here and let me express my hearty congratulations on this well deserved win Hiya. Your poems take me to a wonderful garden where all kinds of flowers bloom and I am reminded of an artist with a palette spraying multishades all over and creating cubic and expressionist paintings like Edvard Munch. Your garden is not one where butterflies visit, but glasswinged sorceress frequent! Amazing !
Mitra Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 10:24 PM
A deserving Trophy for your talent Hiya, every line of your writings is a poetry
Jones Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 8:56 PM
Congrats on a first place win.
Kendrick Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work. Sara
Empress Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Omg yeay! Im so happy you got 1st place my beautiful and talented angelic star!!! Congratulations!!!!
Andresen Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 9:25 AM
- An impressive piece of writing, Hiya ... congratulations on your trophy win :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 4:26 PM
Your quiver of unique words of imagery and descriptive phrases must be unlimited, or it refills every day. Your poetry continues to amaze me, Hiya. With all the beauty, you still weave mindful messages to your readers. Nuggets of truth and morsels of hope. I especially liked the line, "drowsy poppies too have streaks of wine stories to narrate in their ages of ache". A FAV for my list, my friend. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Once again a very descriptive work you have penned. Emotive and expressive as well. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
One Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:21 AM
You have a wonderful way weaving your words.. Your vocabulary is brilliant with so many different descriptions and metaphors... I can feel the angst in your questions and the yearning for understanding.. The start is brilliant and the third stanza brilliant.. Every stanza has vivid imagery... Great poem Hiya
Pandit Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 8:31 AM
For, I believe that, drowsy poppies too have streaks of wine stories to narrate in their ages of ache-- --meet me along the horizons where bright Veronica takes the shape of the moon and reincarnates ---You dwell in this fabulous world of artistic diction that never ceases to impress. Much enjoyed the ride on the wings of your vocabulary, Hiya.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:43 AM
I have many poems in reserve and some deal with sorceresses. Doubt if mine will ever reach the mastery of your poetry. Your imagery, vocabulary and metaphoric uses are great. A poem to admire especially your alliteration and depth. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Dear angelic star, every line in this conveys so much and is so very deeply moving! Its like i just had a metaphorical cocktail with similes and so much imagery and depth! Absolutely love the way you deliver thoughts, sometimes i wonder too how come those photogenic ones aka the ones that are fake but deep within are cruel never face karma and as u said frozen! And the best way to ignore toxicity is by being immersed in an artistic world coloring darkness like a glass winged sorceress! How deep
Sharma  Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:21 AM
My lovely Ink, you're so sweet always!! Thank you so msuch for reading through my words and emotions & actually feeling them.. Your beautiful comments always inspire my heart and are truly rewarding.. And as always, I learn so much from you as you're my inspiration! My fellow glasswinged sorceress and fairy goddess! Sending you lots of love, I'm forever grateful~ :)
Empress Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:22 AM
I love ur use of colors and alliterations especially ur use of purple through out in an artistic manner describing and expressing so much as well as questioning all that which flows in this cruel life! Two faced world we live in! Profound and soul hitting this is! Nailed it! And also must highlight ur winter theme here is beyond impeccable! How uve played around with words. Keep shining! Be your own sorceress! Glass winged! Uhuh!airbrushed lies doesnt define you! Yes u are learning that very young! Love this
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