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Glass in the Iron

A fragment of glass in the iron, can't you see it? It's here! Almost heart shaped enough, to alter one's perception, as the beats depart, just to reappear.

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Douglas Brown

Date: 9/10/2024 12:56:00 PM

Lovely.

Kate Davies
Date: 9/10/2024 1:21:00 PM

Thank you Douglas :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/22/2024 12:41:00 PM

Iron is also in blood, glass is sand, elements can deceive or generate a sign. Your heart must have been generating love. Serendipitous Kate!

Kate Davies
Date: 5/23/2024 2:08:00 PM

Thank you for saying such lovely things:)

Silent One

Date: 5/22/2024 10:42:00 AM

True words..

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/22/2024 7:11:00 AM

Excellent poetry about perception and how a single particle of glass may change one's perspective on the world. You properly described the existence of a shard of glass in an iron substance and how it might alter one's perception of things, Kate. Thanks for your comment and visit to my page.

Kate Davies
Date: 5/23/2024 2:07:00 PM

Thank you for such kind feedback!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/22/2024 2:05:00 AM

Such depth in this poem, I quite enjoyed reading.

Kate Davies
Date: 5/22/2024 5:46:00 AM

Thank you Arthur:)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/21/2024 2:11:00 PM

Glass making is a formidable art. This is a quick look into perfection. I enjoy it.

Kate Davies
Date: 5/21/2024 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Hilda, glad you enjoyed it :)