Girlie Man

I have to admit I don't understand This poetry style they call "the slam" I cry when they call me names It's me that everyone blames My wife even calls me a "girlie man"

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James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2010 12:55:00 PM

Nice one Larry, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations Larry on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Anti-Slam Limericks". Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/18/2010 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place win in Carolyn's contest, Larry! Had a good laugh with this one! Peace, love, audrey

Amy Green

Date: 7/17/2010 6:40:00 PM

Rock on , Larry! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2010 2:54:00 PM

I like your funny approach to this one. Congratulations, girlie man! heehee Andrea

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/17/2010 1:51:00 PM

Congrats, Larry. Nice going, Pal. Ralph

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/17/2010 1:49:00 PM

What an absolute hoot this is, Larry!... Love the way you 'put yourself down' with humor...Tells me you've been around and seen a thing or two... Reminds me of the classic Saturday Night Live skits (We are here to PUMP YOU UP)...No surprise you gotta' winner here! - Tim

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/17/2010 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations Larry, on placing 2nd in Carolyn's contest with this witty poem. Very nice! Lovingly, Dane Ann

John Freeman

Date: 7/17/2010 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations Larry on # 2. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/17/2010 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on taking second place. "Girlie man" is a term I recall from Saturday Night Live and I got a kick out of your poem, Larry. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/17/2010 12:25:00 PM

lol, good one , good luck

Mitch White

Date: 7/17/2010 12:21:00 PM

It's like- Hey read my ramblings! Slam is like shards of glass in my work gloves- I put up with em until I buy a new pair. GL in the nontest my friend