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Giggles

Giggles/haiku surf tickling new toes diapers kicked to freedom naked sun splashes 3/8/2015 submitted to – (Make Me Chuckle with a haiku) Haiku #1 – Poetry Contest sponsor - PD

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/14/2015 7:36:00 PM
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I was thinking turd in the ocean for an ending line. Paying you back for your comment on my penguins. hahaha this is great
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2015 11:20:00 AM
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such beautiful cute imagery - made me smile:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2015 10:27:00 AM
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John, so visual, I can just see the wee one enjoying their first swim, well done and best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/9/2015 3:13:00 AM
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A good write! Julia, xx
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Kim Shaw
Date: 3/8/2015 7:08:00 PM
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I love this, John! There is nothing more infectious than the giggles and thrills of an infant experiencing a 'first'. *7* from me. Hugs, Kimberly
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/8/2015 4:36:00 PM
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Well, it did give ME a chuckle. ;) Lovely...and thanks for your visit to my work. Much appreciated.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/8/2015 4:04:00 PM
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lol...all my kids loved to go naked
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/8/2015 3:41:00 PM
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This is adorable John. Bright vivid imagercy dances in my eyes.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/8/2015 3:44:00 PM
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Thanks Connie, one of my nephews would kick that diaper off as soon as the surf hit his toes.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/8/2015 3:44:00 PM
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Thanks Connie, one of my nephews would kick that diaper off as soon as the surf hit his toes.

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