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Ghouls and Goblins Draped In Snow, 1991

Alex, only 3-yrs. old; insisted I take her out in the blinding blizzard! She knew which neighbors had candy! Snow drifts were swirling over 3-ft. by now! I told her "Alexandra, if you'll put a snowsuit over your costume, i'll take you down to the corner and back, but I'll have to carry you!" Time began shifting in tremulous tides of Antarctica Carved pumpkins changed faces; heckling us, glowing in frozen stares The storm was blinding us with sideways pelting frozen ice and snow Can’t move my feet Next thing I knew, nothing was there no houses...no street....just doom.... With snow piling high the streetlights submerged Another world lurked now six feet below The candy seemed strange not quite from this place Frozen like mummies a bitter aftertaste It’s then that I knew I’d better hurry home Save myself and my kids from what I don’t know Blinded by snow with nowhere to turn We spun three times ‘round and found ourselves home 11/19/10 8:21 pm Remembering the great "Halloween Night Storm" of 1991, My Daughter Alex was determined to go out! I had to carry her All done up in her costume!

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Date: 11/20/2010 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on this HM win in the contest, James
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Date: 11/20/2010 1:42:00 PM
Wow! Snow on Halloween. We had rain sometimes, but it must be pretty cold in your town, Jimbo. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2010 12:01:00 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your HM in Paula's contest with this wonderful write and win.. a perfect piece to express the theme ... a Happy Thanksgiving to u and your family with luv...
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:36:00 AM
Very wonderful entry to the contest, Good luck, James
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Date: 11/20/2010 5:17:00 AM
NOw this is creepy...lol. I love the last line..gave a sigh of relief when I read it. BG
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Date: 11/19/2010 11:47:00 PM
Very creative this one. with shades of Nightmare Before Christmas and Wizard of Oz! it was a cool entry. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/19/2010 8:22:00 PM
Spooky and Cool Jimbo at the same time.. good luck in Paula's lively contest luv.. enjoyed this brilliant write luv.. happy weekend...
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