Notes About The Poem

24.09.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
Copyright © All Rights Reserved


Ghouls and Goblins Poetry Contest
(Ghosts, Ghouls, Goblins, Witches, Candy,
Zombies, Pumpkins, Frankenstein)
Sponsored by: Joseph May

3rd place in the contest

Story Pin-bilde

- Ghosts -


         Gloomy ghosts seek the dark
         Ghastly humid death mist
         Grandma doesn't like cold feet
         grandpa, a nasty cough
         Grumpy ghosts cause trouble
         Glimpse emerges, blood moon
         Grace to my ancestry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 2:25 PM
Ahhh!! Delightful winning work you have penned. Congratulations to you. Way to go. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 8:32 AM
Good one Anne-Lise. RIP. :) Congratulations! :)
Miller Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Back with congrats!
May Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest Anne, Very nicely penned
Miller Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 8:12 AM
Grumpy ghosts will get ya, excellent entry GL in the contest
Poet Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 8:05 AM
An unambiguous signal that the Halloween season is approaching, a haunting one, Anne-Lise, wishing you the best with this contest entry.
DiMino Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 4:52 AM
Yep, God have mercy on them...and, for yourself, speak kindly of them. Don't make them made. You are probably far too young to remember the old Topper movies, but they were fun.
Cunningham Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 12:30 AM
A sure sign Halloween is on the way, a spooky one Anne-Lise, hope your week is going well. Tom
George Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 7:44 PM
'Grandma doesn't like cold feet'.... as she knows that those with cold feet alone are chased by ghosts. Well done Anne. All the best. Hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 5:27 PM
well done for the contest, Anne-Lise...best wishes with this entry...hugs, Sara
Godwin Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 3:20 PM
I really like this, the lines about grandma and grandpa are precious. Such a mixture of different ghost images, well done, Anne-Lise. Sent you a soupy.
Rodgers Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 1:36 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, It's so atmospheric and chilling. The way you moved from those spooky images to the more personal details about grandma's cold feet and grandpa's cough was really powerful. It makes the piece feel both creepy and deeply human at the same time. Blessings, Anne-Lise, Daniel
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace