Ghosts

Ghosts of moments from our past
     linger just beyond reach.
Those we once held most dearly,
     now we silently beseech.

Silver secrets of first love--
     now but sighs upon the wind,
near a  place where, long ago,
     broken hearts would soon begin.

Ghosts of a love, once captured 
      but escaped in the quiet.
Childrens' whispers, their giggles
      fade to echoes in the night.

Ghosts hold the secret stories
      of our lives now almost spent-- 
ghosts of memories that remain
     where, once, only dreams were sent.

Originally submitted October, 2021
Reworked and submitted January 23,2022
for A Brian Strand (1058) Poetry Contest
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Alex Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 5:33 PM
Great on various types of ghosts. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Peck Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much for your comments, Christuraj Alex. I appreciate them!
Horsman Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 1:24 AM
Oh wow, this is wonderful poetry, those just out of reach, love the sentiment.
Peck Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 2:18 PM
In retrospect, I think I didn't put the info. at the bottom, like we were supposed to. I think I put it in the place for descriptions of poem. How dumb can I be!
Peck Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Thanks, Harry. It just wasn't what the sponsor was looking for.
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 4:22 PM
This is so lovely, Ann. I sure hope it makes the winner list.
Peck Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Thanks, Andrea. It didn't. I think it probably wasn't long enough. I just discovered your Tanka, "Fireflies." It's so beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Great take on the subject!
Peck Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Thanks, Kim. I imagine she's looking for funny poems, though.
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