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Scientists say it’s just a mirage, but sailors claim the ghost ship floats in air, with stormy seas below. Again he tries to round Cape Hope. Captain van der Decken angered God one savage 18th Century night. Vowed he’d sail till “Judgment Day,” to cross the Table Bay, he’d fight. The Flying Dutchman disappeared sank deep in foggy, wind-swept sea, but the captain’s doomed to walk the deck each night in perpetuity. His curse prevails in Wagner’s Opera and Washington Irving’s story; crews tremble, ghost ship emerges Dutchman floats in frightening glory. So many sailors and their ships still meet demise on starless nights, when demons steer the Dutchman and a vengeful God reads last rites.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2014 8:29:00 PM
A great story and win, Carolyn. I remember hearing stories of the Flying Dutchman when I was still a youngster. You did it up proud. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/26/2014 9:47:00 AM
A great story, congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:46:00 PM
Carolyn, I enjoyed this fascinating story so well-written! Congratulations on your top win which I thoroughly enjoyed reading. BRAVO!
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:36:00 PM
Amazing write, Carolyn.. Makes me want to stay the heck off ships!!... Congrats on a well deserved win.. Hugs, Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:39:00 PM
a stirring prose, carolyn.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:29:00 PM
First time I'm reading this Flying Dutchman narrative poem. You come out of it with 'flying' colours! Congratulations, Carolyn! // paul
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:03:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved and enjoyed your nice one. bl
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Date: 1/9/2012 9:37:00 PM
I seem to recall this. A golden oldie it would be now (like the one I put in the contest too). those are the poems that stand the test of time, CArolyn. Congratulations with this awesome story.
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing win, Carolyn in Debbie's contest, " Tell Me A Story. " I hope you are doing fine and have a New Year's resolution. Have you received my Soup mail? If you haven't , please check it. Have a blessed day. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on you win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:39:00 PM
What a great story Carolyn Well done. Congratulations
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:13:00 PM
All the time , the red red wine, enflames of the passion, love without love, is shortened is, the ration,:) xo Don... Great poem , of Ghost ship on the current slips, it's timbers old n grey Captain doomed n cursed, perhaps the first, 2 sail till Judgement Day xo
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:11:00 PM
hey you? are you feeling better or are you really in bad shape, your my friend and if there is anything I can do to help you just have to ask, I have a mission, a gift that God has allowed me to do, you know that I'm a published author, not a million seller but the Lord works in mysterious ways, Your pen is mighty my friend and this is a very good flow. god bless
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Date: 4/23/2011 10:59:00 AM
It seems the sea air is doing you good Carolyn, if this quality is anything to go by! wishing you the very best!
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Date: 4/22/2011 6:02:00 PM
Very intriguing and gripping tale on the Flying Dutchman you have here Carolyn! Super congrats on your win with this! hugs :)
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Date: 4/22/2011 9:30:00 AM
congratulations Carolyn on your win with this eerie tale...
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:16:00 PM
Congratulation Carolyn on your honored poetry in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 2:49:00 PM
Amazing tale of the Flying Dutchman! You write as if an ancient book of literature was before me! Congratulations on your well done job! (Glad to see you back! :)
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Deb, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:15:00 PM
I love those fantastic legends of the sea as you know Carolyn. I love the way you wove this beautiful tapestry of the 'Flying Dutchmen'. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:05:00 AM
Nice job, Carolyn! Congrats on your win!! Ellen <3
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:43:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Carolyn : ) I knew this one had to be a winner. Did you know that Gert is 68 tomorrow, by the way?
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:22:00 AM
Awesome tale Carolyn. Many warm congrats for this terrific write and win.
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Date: 4/20/2011 9:50:00 AM
Very nice story. Wish it was longer ...
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