Ghost Dance

Hands on our neighbours’ shoulders,
we encircle the decorated pine,
my chanting father at the centre.
Faces painted, dressed in white, hair adorned, 
we march, chant and wail,
throwing dust over our heads.
Then stand, hands clasped overhead, eyes heavenwards.

Holding hands, we sway, 
moving in time to our chants.
Faster, faster.
Everything blurring,
the ground becomes dust,
my neighbours drop, twitching, quivering,
but we don’t stop.
Faster, faster.
The ground’s coming up to meet me…

Finally, we sit in a circle
And come out of the trance.
Each stands at the centre, and relates an experience.
I say I saw an eagle flying high,
and then swooping low,
but when I reached for it, it wasn’t there.

About Sioux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Interesting and artistic write. We are often dismissive of other cultures, when we really shouldn't be. Well done.
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jack in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Shaman's Way". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Such a rich event, inspiring, frightening, a good chose for the contest, a very nice WIN! Light & Love
Susan Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 8:33 AM
Congrats on your win! You really captured the experience nicely!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Congrats Jack on your big win in Debbie's contest.. a fascinating write my friend. enjoy with luv..
Mehta Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Cngratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, jack
Guzzi Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 1:11 PM
We went there with you very good Jack. Is this entered? Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Thanks for your comment, Jack. I didn't really succumb to the chocolate temptation, so I guess I used "poetic license" as you would say. :) Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Oh Jack, this sound as if you had been really there in the middle of that dance! Closing my eyes I feel the beat and the dancing spirits! Great poem!!! Have a nice week ahead! Love, Gert If this is for the contest, I'll cross fingers then!! Love, Gert
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 12:25 PM
I think it would be incredible to be able to have such a vision as this. Well related! Did you actually take part in this, or is it just imagination? IS this for Deb's contest. If so, I think it will do great!
Locksley Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 8:10 PM
What an interesting poem Jack. It's very well written and I enjoyed learning about this Sioux ritual. Best to you, Diane
La France Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 4:56 PM
In my dreams, I hear the drums beating, I see the flickering fire and with my Ojibwe spirits, I join in the dances, the feather in my long raven hair, flutters, your poem was very meaningful to me, it truly touched my soul, thank you, I am placing it in my favs~~
Sweetheart Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Love poetry about this intriguing theme and culture.. amazing words Jack .. u should enter this one in Matt Caliri's contest if it is still open luv.. happy weekend and thankxx for your great remarks..made me smile..
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April 8, 2011 at 2:37 PM
i thought i made a comment on this poem, and now its gone. i will just say i enjoyed this write. and thank you for reading the Old Train Depot and for your comment.
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