Get Up Dad

Blood dripping constantly into your veins busy nurse,doctor open your eyes get up Dad! Just for once! ===============000=============== Contest :Ninette **this is a picture from my memory(14 years ago,when my Dad expired)

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Carrie Richards

Date: 4/9/2012 1:45:00 PM

Compelling and filled with that heartbreakiing moment. (I have been there too, my friend...and know what you have witnessed) something that is never forgotten.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/6/2012 1:14:00 AM

Hi my friend...thinkin of you since your last comment, AND wishing you the best...Hope u are alright. :) Gwendolen

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/29/2012 8:09:00 PM

very emotional one Kash........

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/28/2012 6:02:00 PM

A nice piece Kash...Sorry about your Dad...hope you have great memories. BG

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/28/2012 3:56:00 PM

Congrats on your HM, Kash! Such a sad, touching write. Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2012 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Ninette" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2012 9:48:00 PM

I'm so happy this one got on the list. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 8:20:00 PM

congrats Kash on an HM for this exceptional write in Ninette luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2012 10:28:00 PM

I know what a big effect his death had on you, Kash. And your poem expresses that. By the way, the poem on dear dying cat was not my callie cat. that poem was about a cat I found on the road dying as I drove home one day and I just picked it up and tried to find the house of its owner before it died, but I never found its owner. So I just laid it by a house because it died as I held it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2012 10:07:00 AM

a great write Kash and stated so vividly for a young person to see this happen.. my Daddy died when I was 3 so this one is fitting for me luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2012 11:45:00 AM

Kash, I'm sorry you lost your father. Watching a parent die is a very emotional experience. Your ninette is genuinely moving. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/25/2012 2:54:00 AM

A sad memory Kash, you wrote it beautifully.. All the best for the contest ;-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2012 1:29:00 PM

a poignant write that reminds me of the time my dad passed on... love this to bits, kashi buddy!... awwwight, win it..) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/24/2012 1:17:00 PM

My medical insight spans the room for all that could have occurred that dismal day...Poignant gem. A hard-hitting moment when time stood still! Thanks for giving us a peak into your soul, Kash. These personal writes are the most heart-stirring! :) Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 3/24/2012 8:06:00 AM

Sad write, Kash - but a great entry for the contest

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/24/2012 7:29:00 AM

very sad but well written!

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/24/2012 12:44:00 AM

This is the love, tribute, pledges that reinforce the bonds of everyday by your side love, regards to a heavenly relation between a Father and Son. Thank you for sharing it so poetically. Write on please my dear great writer.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/23/2012 11:08:00 PM

So sad, Kash, and touching. I'm sorry you are reliving the moment of your dad's passing. I hope sharing it helps bring you some peace. Blessings, Rhonda

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/23/2012 7:23:00 PM

Very touching family portrait. Hope all is alright for you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/23/2012 6:03:00 PM

So sad Kash, you OK..you talk to me if you are sad! Light & Love