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Georgia in mid-March

the roaring sound rejuvenates my heart wind whips, bells tinkle, flag flaps thought i needed to change into shorts but my just bare feet, thin sweater blue jeans perfect for this early Spring blustering lilliputian tweets and vroom beats such temperate tempest jubilation lifts my spirits if the sea were involved with its swanky salt I’m seconds away from the pearly gates

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Date: 3/25/2024 5:47:00 PM
Georgia is a famous state. I have never been there, yet I read about it. Nice read! Very enjoyed poem!
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Date: 3/25/2024 4:11:00 PM
I could feel the air. Almost. Hope you go to the beach soon! ;) Hugs
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Date: 3/24/2024 8:02:00 PM
Fantastic and enthusiastic poem for March!
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Date: 3/24/2024 8:01:00 PM
I can just picture the windblown, windswept landscape, Kim. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 3/24/2024 4:59:00 PM
Now I've got "Georgie on my mind!" Seriously, I only visited Georgia once, but you captured its beauty magnificently. I especially liked: lilliputian tweets and vroom beats The structure of your poem made me think of winds blowing and scattering your words across the page...have a great evening, hugs & blessings, Sara
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Date: 3/24/2024 3:28:00 PM
Someone is having a great day. Sounds like you, Kim. Uplifting and enjoyable poem to read. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 3/24/2024 8:15:00 AM
Very creative Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 3/24/2024 8:00:00 AM
I'd love to see those gates too. Lovely piece Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thank you, Tonye! What a view!
Date: 3/23/2024 9:09:00 PM
Georgia and toy seem well suitrd ti each other. Your descriptio n of it are stunninf and narcg the frateful poetess I know you To be! Phave to fave this! Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2024 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie! So glad you liked it!

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