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Grains of sand rush swiftly between my toes Soothing liquid Soft and safe So sweet Mild Calm Whispers Lulling sleep Through my spirit Echoes of mellow dreams paint me with light Image Number 2 September 14, 2020 Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Date: 9/17/2020 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Regina, my f fiend!!
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Date: 9/17/2020 7:09:00 PM
Lovely write, Regina .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..
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Date: 9/14/2020 8:56:00 PM
I love the feeling of soft white sand between bare toes, and also like how the poem looks like an hourglass!
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Date: 9/14/2020 11:50:00 AM
Hello Regina, McIntosh, you made me feel like i was on the beach. Enjoy ytour day my friend.
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Date: 9/14/2020 7:10:00 AM
- Described beautifully, best wishes in the contest Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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