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never good enough under the weight of mothers damage rolls downhill ***

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Date: 8/3/2020 11:30:00 AM
Witty write Mo mam:-) Deep thought provoking messages packed in all your haiku's & senryu's mam. You present your concepts cute and compactly:-)I wish you teach me those tactics;-) Have a blessed day.Take care.Much love:-)
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/4/2020 8:44:00 AM
It's your gift ..& not a curse Mo mam. Keep inspiring:-)..!!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/3/2020 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Lovely! Gift or curse, It’s just the way my brain works... like a sieve ;), xomo!
Date: 8/3/2020 7:17:00 AM
Ooh! Were the 'Smothers Brothers,' comedians and musicians, on your radar ever? ... Well, they're nothing compared to to smothering mothering eh?!... And I echo Andrea's insightful comment. Profundity in three lines here! :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/3/2020 3:06:00 PM
Lol! You got something there! Thank you Wolf Man. I hope you are keeping well. xomo
Date: 8/3/2020 6:08:00 AM
Very perceptive dearest, Maureen! Have seen a lot of it as director of schools! Hugs xxx
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/3/2020 3:05:00 PM
No doubt x! Warm hugs!
Date: 8/2/2020 2:48:00 PM
Just love the succinct way you are able to put such deep messages!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/2/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea! xomo <3
Date: 8/2/2020 11:58:00 AM
Think of the bright side; unlike the God of the Middle East, few mothers drown children who do not meet their expectations! Aloha! Rico
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/2/2020 5:36:00 PM
You’re so freak’n funny. Amen brah. RSD ~x
Date: 8/2/2020 9:34:00 AM
So much truth... Is there a more complex relationship? Complex seems fitting in many ways... :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/2/2020 5:38:00 PM
Complex indeed! The epitome of the love hate relationship, where you learn to hate yourself. ooh, there may be a poem in there... ;), xomo!
Date: 8/1/2020 10:45:00 PM
This is why it is up to us to break the patterns that incensed our sense of justice.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/2/2020 5:42:00 AM
Amen to that sister <3
Date: 8/1/2020 8:04:00 PM
Oh, great title and brilliant wit, Mo. If only it weren't "born" of great heartache.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/2/2020 5:41:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I don’t know that my muse will ever run dry on the subject ;), Have a lovely day, xomo!
Date: 8/1/2020 6:57:00 PM
Tugs at the heartstrings, so potent and poignant...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/2/2020 5:40:00 AM
Thank you my friend, hope you are keeping well. You and your city are in my thoughts, xomo
Date: 8/1/2020 1:13:00 PM
Yes Mo but sometimes we need to be the first to break the cycle, start fresh enjoy life, let the past go...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2020 2:55:00 PM
Amen to that. While it still occasionally tickles my muse, I have broken that cycle. Thank you John, xomo
Date: 8/1/2020 12:36:00 PM
wow! thought-provoking! great poem...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2020 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Ilene! Mo hugs, hope you are keeping well. xomo
Date: 8/1/2020 11:31:00 AM
but she has inspired great work from you!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2020 2:56:00 PM
She certainly has ;), a Thank you Sharon! xomo
Date: 8/1/2020 9:07:00 AM
good one! as a mother, I have tried to take that weight off of my daughter cos I still carry the weight of mine though it is getting lighter with time or I've just become quite the weight-lifter! lol :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2020 3:01:00 PM
Doing “reps”, not repeating ;), It takes strength, wisdom and will to end generational pain. Hats off to you, xomo <3
Date: 8/1/2020 8:59:00 AM
yes, but what others say is not important.. not does it mean it is true...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2020 3:02:00 PM
True dat. Digging it out from so deep ingrained. xomo
Date: 8/1/2020 8:52:00 AM
It can't stay up forever... so it down go time...everything will pass...Well done
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/1/2020 3:03:00 PM
Every thing, every one. yup. So Love and Hugs in the now! xomo