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Gave I My Wife

Gave I my wife a gentle hug, on her cheek placed a little peck. Frankly she had rather have a rug. Persisted I the hole be deeper dug and kissed her on the neck. Gave I my wife a gentle hug. She asked me then, “see that bug” and squished it under foot. Frankly she had rather have a rug. Maybe I misunderstood the tug, thought I felt in heat of passion. Gave I my wife a gentle hug. Shook her head, mop she drug. Cleaned up the squish, sadly said; "frankly she had rather have a rug" “Get out of here you ugly mug”. Said with smile artificially smug. Gave I my wife a gentle hug. Frankly she had rather have a rug. © Jun 06 2010 for Dr. Mehta's Villanelle contest

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Date: 7/3/2010 12:48:00 PM
hey Charlse, a great entry and a worthy win. Enjoy your winnings. keep up the great work. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:45:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this wonderful write ... an amazing win for u and enjoy your big success and victory dance of course... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. watching fireworks..AlohA
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations Charles on your success in the competition, Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:43:00 PM
Congrats on the 8th place win in my contest
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:52:00 PM
So funny..I hope you gave her the rug...lol I got a kick out of your response to my blog..i am learning that there is a vast undercurrent here on the soup..I am almost always out of the loop..and like it that way.. BG
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:56:00 AM
Very cute Charles and am sure Carolyn appreciated it.. haha.. good luck in Dr. Ram's contest .. a fun write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:17:00 AM
Not sure exactly what you meant by this one...It is an excellent write to the form...I hope that it was all in jest and your wife understands your sense of humor...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2010 7:33:00 AM
Never romance a wife when she's cleaning. This was fun. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:49:00 AM
This is fun to read, and a delightful beginning to my day! Enjoyed your poem, Charles!! Hope she hugs you back!! :)
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:39:00 AM
Ha, I like your Villanelle my friend.... Well written and entertaining..... Good luck in the docs contest.......:JP]
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:13:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest
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