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For Gate or Gates poetry contest Sponsored by Constance LA France Use the following words: 1. ghostly 2. gossamer 3. grave 4. godforsaken 5. grief-stricken 6. groaning
She returns here every May sixteenth, the day she was to marry. I saw her GHOSTLY visage there at the GATES of the cemetery. I went, as I've done everyday, to lay flowers upon her GRAVE. I, the GRIEVE-STRICKEN groom just striving to be brave. Just as the sun set and darkness fell I heard a ghastly GROANING. I ran to where the sound had been from a tomb I heard her moaning. Just by the rusted, wrought iron gate stood a GODFORSAKEN soul in gown of white GOSSAMER and grave dirt. My weak heart beat out of control. Then suddenly a flash of light, and she was as she had been. I was in my good white suit... they must have buried me in. Together, hand in hand again we finally got to marry! Then we entered our eternity through the gates of the cemetery.

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Date: 7/1/2025 1:02:00 PM
Ghoulish fun Crystol. And your rhymes just keep getting better. As you know, the key to great rhyming is to not sound forced, or to use words that are out of context for the sake of rhyme. I love watching your progress. Soupmail
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Date: 7/1/2025 11:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Gate to our Eternity" write/story. Great Ending... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/1/2025 12:50:00 PM
Oh goody! I'll come visit to read yours too! Xo
Date: 7/1/2025 9:50:00 AM
Oh wow. You did this so well. I have mine written and set aside and seeing yours, I just realized I forgot the word gossamer!! Crap. How will I fit it into a sonnet? Thanks for seeing so many of my poems, Crystol
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/1/2025 12:49:00 PM
Oh no! I'm not too worried about you fitting the word... you're so talented I'm sure your Sonnet will be wonderful! I read some of your poetry for inspiration! If i feel stuck like I can write, I'll read instead. Eventually inspiration strikes! Xo

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