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Copyright Protected, ID 08-1574-473-26
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, August 26, 2023
For the International Contest, G or T Personification
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 09/01/2023

First Place

Free Gate Winter photo and picture

I am a gate in a cemetery and have been for many years, when opening or closing I now creak, groan and moan; I am real old and have seen lots of sorrow, tears and pain, have witnessed heartbreak and have wanted to reach out. Beyond me ancient trees sway in the gentle breeze, and birds sing a sweet melody that floats in the air; a symphony for the dead and wind wails like a violin, down long winding, weaving roads of peace. I love the sound of the rain falling that washes me, the grass becomes emerald green and flowers bloom; the sun is delightful so warm and comforting, for an old creaking gate like me- I bask in its glory. I open wide for those funerals of many cars, it hurts my soul to see those sad faces staring ahead; I watch until they are out of sight among the trees, wish I could tell them I will protect their loved one. Love when the silent white snow is falling, falling, not many come in the cold of winter but some still do; a girl came today with red roses and tears in her eyes, she paused leaning on me then, walked on weeping.

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Date: 9/2/2023 10:13:00 AM
A poignant poem Constance, You are a winner as usual.
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Date: 9/5/2023 5:28:00 AM
Jay, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and win
Date: 9/2/2023 9:20:00 AM
The idea of personifying a gate that sees so much sorrow, is quite unique. You portrayed it perfectly, and the touching tale to end your emotion filled poem left the reader mesmerized with that image. Congrats on your 1st place win.
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Date: 9/5/2023 5:29:00 AM
Speaks, thank you so much for your comment, compliment and congrats
Date: 9/1/2023 11:42:00 PM
A poignant write Constance, Congrats on your win
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2023 5:29:00 AM
Joseph, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats
Date: 8/27/2023 6:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem , what a gift you have in expressing love unto all through many different ways: ).
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Constance La France
Date: 8/29/2023 9:08:00 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the comment and the compliment, blessings !
Date: 8/27/2023 1:30:00 PM
This is a highly imaginative, creative personification Constance. You give and bring so much life to the gate in such a beautiful way. Gorgeous, poetic, heartfelt lines as I know you write so well. I love your style Constance and your great skill to convey deep feelings. So hauntingly beautiful. Always inspiring …
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Constance La France
Date: 8/29/2023 9:09:00 AM
Christina, thank you so much for the comment, compliment on my poem and writing, blessings !
Date: 8/26/2023 6:18:00 PM
A wonderful personification Constance, a delightful read… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 8/27/2023 9:00:00 AM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate, blessings !

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