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Gaseous Poop Blow

Smiting spread of gaseous explosion blow He sprayed baby cologne with fresh mint glow As classmates guessed puzzling scent Poop came out as toilet-sent… Then he blurted, “Thanks* God for freedom flow!”
1Thessalonians 5:18 *In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you. June 25, 2023 2nd place, "POOP" Limerick Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by JAN ALLISON; judged on 7/4/2023.

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Date: 7/15/2023 1:47:00 PM
Oh my dear Beata, only you could put a religious twist to a limerick. You are an amazing and talented person in oh so many ways! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 7/6/2023 11:02:00 PM
Haha you still got in religion. Congrats on the win, Beats.
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Date: 7/4/2023 4:43:00 PM
You would have placed 1st if the syllable count in line 1 had been perfect Beata!Thanks so much for supporting the contest and many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/26/2023 10:18:00 AM
A fun/creative write. If this is for the Poop contents, I also did one. Enjoy your day with blessings...................
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