Beata Agustin Poet Limerick

Gaseous Poop Blow

Smiting spread of gaseous explosion blow
He sprayed baby cologne with fresh mint glow
As classmates guessed puzzling scent
Poop came out as toilet-sent…
Then he blurted, “Thanks* God for freedom flow!”

1Thessalonians 5:18 *In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you.

June 25, 2023
2nd place, "POOP" Limerick Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by JAN ALLISON; judged on 7/4/2023.

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Linda Alice Fowler July 15, 2023 at 1:47 PM Oh my dear Beata, only you could put a religious twist to a limerick. You are an amazing and talented person in oh so many ways! Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2023 at 11:02 PM Haha you still got in religion. Congrats on the win, Beats.

Jan Allison July 4, 2023 at 4:43 PM You would have placed 1st if the syllable count in line 1 had been perfect Beata!Thanks so much for supporting the contest and many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2023 at 10:18 AM A fun/creative write. If this is for the Poop contents, I also did one. Enjoy your day with blessings...................