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Garden Mine

To smell the fresh bloomed flower within this tangled mess of what was once a garden lush thriving on happiness I'd have to chop through brambles deep that reach out to snarl and scratch Crawl over dry weeds and choking vines to reveal a life detached Is it worth the emotion and pain to witness the scent of beauty Should I not stay within my capsuled world where "artificial" rules absolutely

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/9/2010 3:14:00 PM
I enjoyed this read, well written poem. I think I'll take a chance and step out into the world.
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