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Funny How My Winter Turned Into Summer

FUNNY HOW MY WINTER TURNED INTO SUMMER I walk in drifts so cold, a bitter bite. My boots with holes, a stab of pain for miles. The flakes do dance around my head tonight. Each one intent to stick upon snow piles. I rub my eyes. I stretch. The morning yawns. Too hot beneath my quilt, of mom’s design. I see green leaves and tender buds of dawn. What season’s change occurred in my recline? How did my Winter turn to Spring, this quick? This joke turns snowballs red and apple shaped. Perhaps, I slept away the snow? Was sick? I wear much warmer skin since time escaped. I’m sunburnt now. I yearn for days of cold. My stranded boots are left, confused and old. 8/16/2017 Contest

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Date: 8/31/2017 9:29:00 AM
Well done, Kim. Congratulations for being on the winning list.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Lin!
Date: 8/31/2017 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2017 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal!
Date: 8/21/2017 6:00:00 AM
A strange sonnet. Great craft, Kim. I enjoyed the read. Ram
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2017 6:51:00 AM
Thanks, Ram!
Date: 8/18/2017 7:31:00 AM
Wonderful sleep and dream, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thanks Jo!
Date: 8/17/2017 7:03:00 PM
I like it. It is very colourful. Metaphors, rimes, size... everything.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2017 7:29:00 PM
Thanks, Serge!
Date: 8/17/2017 4:01:00 PM
Funny how a good dream will do that to you. Well done on this Kim! Good luck with the contest. -- Dean
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thanks, Dean!
Date: 8/17/2017 12:22:00 PM
Good theme--well executed--good luck Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2017 3:45:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!

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