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gazing at your eyes eyes of God stare back at me speaking to my soul

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/20/2023 7:03:00 AM

Deep thoughts, Sara. The eyes are the windows of the soul, and the soul is always looking at God. IMHO Thanks for sharing this thought-provoking Haiku with us Sara. Write on, my Eastside writing Bear, Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/20/2023 1:48:00 PM

thank you, westside writing bear, for venturing into my thought-provoking poem. Thanks for encouraging me to write poetry....hugs from me to you

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/16/2023 7:56:00 PM

Your writing, Sara, is captivating and evocative. It is filled with stunning details that paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind. The concept you have presented is both profound and enchanting.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2023 3:54:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful comments! I respect you and am, therefore, appreciative of your positive words. I'm glad you found my poem evocative...that was one of my goals. Have a wonderful Sunday. Sara

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/16/2023 4:57:00 PM

sensitive imagery, how to respond to the moon ?

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/17/2023 3:52:00 AM

I appreciate you stopping by, Yann. You ask a profound question.....how do we respond to the moon? Enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Ann Foster

Date: 9/16/2023 12:06:00 PM

Yes... He is ... Love this... Ann

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 12:43:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Ann! I appreciate you reading and commenting on my little Haiku. hugs, Sara Hope you have a pleasant Saturday.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/16/2023 9:22:00 AM

Reading the title, seeing your picture and then reading your haiku, makes me think so deep, how someones eyes can be like the moon, light, when everything is dark, you’ve expressed that so well! When i say queen of haiku, well i mean it, because you dont just weave words but theres emotions and your haiku’s are evocative! And sometimes when i moon gaze, i feel exactly the same, speaks to my soul in moon language only the stars can comprehend! You deserve all the accolades! Love this haiku

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 12:45:00 PM

thank you, 'Ink,' for stopping by and sharing our moon language. You said that well. Your thoughts about my Haiku humble me...I try to create poems that are evocative and meaningful. I'm glad, therefore, for your compliments and for your personal 'moon' insights. Enjoy your day, Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/16/2023 8:14:00 AM

Very beautiful, Sara. Love the concept! Pangie xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 12:45:00 PM

thank you, Pangi, for your visit and for your kind words xx, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 9/16/2023 6:10:00 AM

Sweet Sara, I don't need to write you comments filled with twaddles of fluff nuggets. I'll simply say your Haiku is as wonderfully written as if those eyes were speaking to your soul. I appreciate good Haiku.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 12:46:00 PM

I appreciate your simple, kind, and efficient words. Thanks for stopping by, Sara

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/16/2023 5:17:00 AM

It's so true what is said of the eyes Sara! What a lovely haiku to read this morning!!! Happy Saturday xxoo

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 12:47:00 PM

Thank you, Mike, for your visit. I'm glad it lifted you up this morning. Hope you have a wonderful Saturday, xxoo

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/16/2023 4:52:00 AM

Ahh, this is such a soulful and vivid haiku that expresses so much within few words, as always, you really enchanted my heart! How beautiful it is to say that we see God's reflection in one's eyes and feel the divine aura caressing our souls.. That really is such a pure emotion. Beautifully done dearest Sara, I love reading your writes and especially these haikus :) sending love-

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 12:49:00 PM

thank you, Hiya, for your visit and for appreciating my tiny creations. I do enjoy writing them and am grateful that you saw the meaning and felt the emotion. Eyes tell me a great deal about a person. I imagine you have soulful, caring eyes. Sending love back to you this Saturday, Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/16/2023 4:28:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Sara, the eyes say and see it all… Belle

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 4:33:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Belle. I agree, one's eyes say it all. They don't deceive. Enjoy your day. Sara