Frozen In Time

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Hand in hand they meander through  the deserted lane, 
freshly fallen snow crumpling under foot 
Littering the sky, Bright stars,  glittering like coins on a belly dancers belt,
slowly surrender to the coming dawn


Inch by measured inch the glory of Ra overpowers the starlight. 
In a pale blue sky, a pale golden disc, the colour of ripe oats at harvest time, 
looking close enough, and cool enough, to reach out and touch. 
Brilliant rays, arrows of liquid gold, capture the pristine landscape, 
splintering like a million shards of shattered glass. 
No sound, only silence, profound, in the clear crystal air.

In the distance, a cock crows.

Long morning shadows cast by tall pines, 
revealing a lone stoat, resplendent in his ermine coat. 
Emerging from shade, merging with sunlight, 
loping across the virgin snow with bounding grace.
White on white, 
only the black tip of his tail and tiny footprints betraying his presence.

In the distance, a dog barks,
	 
A small cottage, a stone chimney, a whisper of smoke announcing a new day,
A hardy little robin pecking with determination to uncover water under ice. 
A door slams, the robin takes flight. 
Snow slides from the roof to gather in piles like miniature Himalayas. 
Icicles drop pearls as the thaw sets in. The world is awakening.

In the distance, a train whistles.
Still holding hands they walk on.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 5:48 AM
Creative and descriptive writing. Way to go. Congratulations to you on being on homepage. Sara K.
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:31 AM
It was like wlaking down a lane for real loved it lass xx
Quigley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 10:55 PM
Oh, the imagery Margaret. I love it. Congratulations
George   Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 3:48 AM
This is breath-taking, Margaret. Thank you for sharing. Elaine
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February 6, 2010 at 5:40 PM
You have me smiling with this uplifting story. Love the last line. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. keep on writing! Karen
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Beautiful and descriptive write. Nice transition of night to morning. Thanks for sharing.
Devonshire Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 1:35 AM
The transition from night to day is so vivid as seen through the eyes of the couple as they take their winter stroll, Margaret. The reader can see the beauty of nature so well, it's like we are walking with them. Outstanding writing! Love, carolyn
Haick Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 6:49 PM
This is a short movie, Margaret! A beautiful write! Great job as usual Peace and love, Audrey Thank you for your kind comments on my poems!
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 8:06 AM
THis is outstanding work, a masterpiece of words, margaret. right into favs!! Luv, Andrea
Richards Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 7:53 AM
So beautiful.....it seems to be a scene from a wonderful story, or a classic movie, or a beautiful painting.....descriptions are captivating! A lovely poem, Margaret. Love, Carrie
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January 29, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Great pictures Margaret this poem is alive, i feel like am watching something on TV maybe a movie~~
Nutter Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 3:19 AM
The imagery flows before the readers eyes in this wonderful write. I too loved the ending.
Devonshire Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 1:24 AM
So much to see and take in with this poem, Margaret. I love how you conclude the walk outside in the last two lines. Love, Carolyn
Bagnall Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 12:54 AM
You paint a lovely scene - enjoyed the read, the belly dancer bit is nice description but I felt it was a little out of place In a poem about snow, very pretty - thanks for sharing
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