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From Your Use To Be

To my Dearest, Shall you read this? Though this time you mustn't cringe. All this time the spread of clearness, has made the fear inside unhinge. And yet I know that you will crumble, just like this paper in your hand. The time I spent and made you stumble, now with me gone... You'll finally stand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful write, Jessica! Congratulations on your win in Brian's "My Dear..." Contest! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/2/2009 8:18:00 PM
Yes indeed, sometimes we have to let go to show how much we love someone...Warmest greetings on your win with this poem, Jessica!
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Date: 12/1/2009 6:40:00 PM
Congratulaltions on your win, Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/30/2009 9:53:00 PM
Jessica, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
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Date: 11/28/2009 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/27/2009 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica, on your honorable mention in Brian’s “My Dear” writing contest with this very interesting letter. It's easy to see why you won. Your creativity enlivens the mind. Smiles, DAS-J
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Date: 11/26/2009 9:20:00 AM
Powerful write, Jessica, and well deserving of the win in Brian's contest! Congrats! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/26/2009 8:03:00 AM
Congrats, Jessica, on your win in Brian's contest... well deserved win.. good write.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/26/2009 5:45:00 AM
Dear Jessica, Very powerful message here. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/26/2009 1:11:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Jessica.Rgds Brian.My latest contest LOVE CAME DOWN is now open.
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Date: 11/21/2009 5:32:00 PM
Heartbreaking and beautiful, Jessica...got me a little misty-eyed here...gotta' go blow my nose!...Your friend - Tim
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Date: 11/19/2009 11:40:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jessica.Rgds Brian
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